Black Poetry : Masterpieces out of rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 20, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just showed someone..my poem
    it said maybe youre best piece ever written...
    Whatever i think non of these words will
    open his mind
    or touch his heart.
    Oh yes ....
    i expressed myself emotionaly.....
    But i rather did that with a motion
    maturaty.......personaly...
    But those are the changes not given to me
    Masterpieces out of rain.......maybe
    i expressed ..
    but it wont take away the pain.

    Poems will come and go
    it doesnt matter if its about
    pain
    love
    life
    peace
    or .....joy

    they will clean youre mind and heart..
    but heal ?
    for me?
    oh...no

    Than i would rather be the baddest
    writting poet ,but happy on earth
    Than the best writting poet.....

    with a lot of hurt..
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    keep writing sister

    keep writing :)

    peace

    poeticd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin it keep da ink dropping
    write on ! sis
     
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