Quiet Poetry Lounge : massive bloom.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 16, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen for the temple beat
    Over the hot summer heat
    Gentle Ocean calm and blue
    Watch the……
    Black flower bloom into a rose
    As wild flowers begin to grow
    Sweet scents covers the air mass
    A weird frame…as the mind wanders
    In orbs of space…..traveling beyond
    No return watch the
    …………..Moon drop tears
    And the……..starz dance
    Releasing pen to paper
    And just flow in my realm
    As the word play begin
    The sky opens up and takes me in
    The calmness begins….
    Floating
    ……..floating
    F-l-o-a-t-i-n-g
    As the power takes hold
    Wash my pain
    Heal my soul
    As the sunlight shines
    A rainbow appears
    Pretty and bold

    Watch the……
    Black flower blossom into a rose
    From the teardrop of pain
    The power takes hold


    And the release begins.........

    (C) 2004
    blkangel return
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this inspring scribe blooms
    and blossome into a beautiful rose
    love how u express da black flower
    tyte drop sis.............................
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an intense image, as a black flower blooms into a rose. There was a positive energy in this scribe.
     
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    Loved the imagery!
    You painted a picture
    so beautiful!

    Excellent post Sis!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    beautiful.

    :thanks:

    :toast:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice sister...

    loving the vibe here...^5
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the great imagery, sis. What a nice ride this was.
     
  8. caramelpython

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    Thumbs Up!

    :jumping:

    Nice drop MBA!

    :book:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the loving suppoert...
    and upon the moon a rose sits and watches...
    Peace Family
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful how a rose can change
    most welcome this was a sweet release indeed
     
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