Black Poetry : Mary J. Blige you helped me get through...

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mary J. Blige i can so relate
    She had experienced having so much on the plate
    that why fate

    Led me to listen to her
    When Im down i prefer

    Because she said that he was her Everything
    Didnt felt to happy the day you gave me a ring

    Because over and over I said I need a Father in you
    But still you do what you do

    Sometimes I say to myself i cant Be without you
    Still love you boo
    Just want to let you know that chick your with Cant love you (like I can)

    Seven days
    Everything is surely for it to go your way

    As she sing My Life
    The ring i have is not a promise for me to become your wife

    But I cant help not to have No more Drama
    Boy I aint cha mama

    So go get someone else to wipe your @zz
    I got class

    Cause she said it was Your Child
    And thats All I can say

    As I Reminiscence
    Dont make sense

    Cause you was All I need
    You was like my weed

    But I say you cant keep A good woman down
    Even tho Im the one that wears the frown

    As I go through my Playlist
    Ray J pops up with I wish

    But this is my Girl Time
    I press rewind

    As I find the right song to end this
    Boy I wont be able to Miss You
    Because I done Enough Crying!!!!!!!!1
     
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    nothing left for Mary to teach
    she been through it all 365 days
    this was a blaze i truely enjoyed
     
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    nice was to describe yor emotions
    through another artist
    just work on some of your spelling errors
    but nice drop poet
    7/10
    uno
     
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    Dang, this was fire. I liked this. All her hits will surely get you through a lot. I felt ya pain sister and if she ever reads this, I'm sure she will be proud he helped you through.
     
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    you better tell it sis, I love Mary too and she has been through it all and helped me get through it all too.
     
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    I think many can relate to Mary and her music. It's not easy to incorporate that many songs into a poem, and I think you did a good job of it. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    true indeed, Mary exposed her soul so that some could see clearer and become whole!

    I feel and award comin her way sometime soon for how many she has touched thru music/spirit!

    nice dedication poet...........:welldone:
     
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    5^, Nevar. Surely, MJB moved me with her third record:"Share My World". This piece is so right on:kickball:
    :sand:
    :picture:
     
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    feeling your work here poet

    can Mary J
    is kinda deep on relationship and i like how you did this

    so stop crying
    i loved it
    lol
     
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    thanks fam for the love that was shown on this piece. thanks again.
     
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