Quiet Poetry Lounge : Marry Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissHoney, Jun 11, 2006.

  1. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    1:55 and I lay in my bed
    Thoughts of me and you, running through my head
    I tried so much to get you, and now your mine
    I wanna cherish every moment, we have nothing but time
    And all these years of planning on how I was gonna be free
    But you changed my mind, changed my mentality
    Spending time with you is greater then any gift I could have
    You by my side makes me feel so glad
    And I know that you can, and will always satisfy me
    When I don’t know where you are, it feels like I can’t breath
    You make me weak, but stronger in a way
    You support me with everything, so it’s for that I pray
    I remember when I first saw you, diamonds in your eyes
    Lips eager to touch, smile richer then goldmines
    I was so fascinated, by your every move
    For you I didn’t miss one day of school
    My love for you is something I can’t explain
    Nervous from the first time, I tried to spit game
    But now here I am, holding back tears
    Cause baby believe I really care
    So this is what I want for you to be
    My one and only, will you marry me?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet and warm the love runs deep
    flo head on !
     
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    MissHoney:

    I really enjoyed that piece. Did you really ask him? Did he say yes? I sure hope so. Nice scibe
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow....wish I were him....!
    nice write, Poetess...i love the rhyme scheme....you just nailed it....flows for days....
     
  5. MissHoney

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    No, this peice wasn't based on my life, although it sure would of been a great way to pop the question.
     
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    hope a woman spring something like this on me !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I wish someday !!
    this remind me of a piece i did i gotta find it
     
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