Black Poetry : marry me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Feb 14, 2003.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've gotten down on my knees
    praying that you would get on one
    reaining in my "old school" mode
    but i just can't take it anymore
    my love is about to explode
    the feelings you give me
    are more than words can say
    i want you to be my
    forever

    i know we've talked about
    the beauty between us
    holding hands
    warming each other
    when the world rejected
    our collective individuality

    i know we've shared
    moments that
    can't be relived
    but can only be
    built upon

    i just don't think
    the sun would shine the same
    if i couldn't see the rays
    amplifying your aura
    first thing
    in the morning

    i just don't think
    the rain would come down the same
    if it wasn't the soundtrack
    to us sharing each other

    i just don't think
    the stars would shine the same
    if we weren't looking at them together
    making our own constellations
    that reflect
    our cosmic connection

    i just don't think
    my life would be
    my life
    without you

    so now
    i'm putting down the stereotype
    of the strong black woman
    who says she doesn't need a man
    because i need you
    i need your spirit
    i need your energy
    i need your love
    i need the God in you
    i need you to make me
    who i need to be
    i need you to be the man
    in my life
    that i submit to
    because he sumbits to God
    and you love me
    like Christ loves the church
    the Christ that died for the church
    you are the man that would die for me
    and i would die for you

    the love i have for you....
    i can't even express
    maybe this kiss
    will produce understanding in your spirit
    and you can understand
    just how much i love you

    so

    marry me


    diva08 (c) 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl dis was awesome love
    12 roses & a kiss
    happy valentine DIVA08
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is an awesome piece!!


    am
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot!!

    This was hot to def!!
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The imagery is beautiful. I really love this peace.

    *Emma*
     
  6. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    this is a hot piece you put the thoughts out beautifully
    peace love and tranquility

    Sista_gurl
     
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