Black Poetry : married clubbin

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Sep 13, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beat like that boom
    against stained windowpanes
    ahh you know when
    hot licks got a thang jumpin
    oh wow that diggety dank
    flanked left shuddering sounds
    bound in rockabye twisting
    misting sweat for tha get down
    ooo that linoleum floor gone catch fire
    higher tempo resonates
    bra's snapping underwire
    hand clapping smoke tinged air
    just past a toe slide skit
    impressions of *** delight on jean fronts
    grunting for one more hit
    spun three times with a open split
    ahh ****!
    puff-puff but don't pass
    there twelve seconds left
    no time for a remix
    but just enough for a umph ow ugh like dat
    oh and a smack!
    whoo stroll stiff legged walking
    jive talking with back beats
    such a sweet thang
    gone outside to reflect
    putting on a wedding ring.
     
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    Lord have mercy! Gut-bucket juke-joint indiscretion at its poetic best!!
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maaaan, you better put that **** ring back on your ***! LOL, I really got a kick outta this one...so glad I don't go clubbin' anymore.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u say !!!
    well i be dis was str8 off da hook
    see dat's why i stay home ...woooweee!!
     
  5. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...ladies need to check for those ring marks...men too!
     
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    str8 coz it sho nuff be a print
     
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    as always....i'm feeling this poem DJ...
     
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