Black Poetry : Margaret

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Mar 22, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought of you
    For all you gave me
    Dreamin' of that special lady
    Come to rescue you from Shady
    Won't you... be mine?

    Everybody needs somebody
    Lovin' scores just being naughty
    High and mighty ruins the party
    I'm down with l-o-v-e

    Margaret,
    I love you dearly
    All the friendship ever given
    All the heartbreak we've forgiven
    Now... is our time

    Climb aboard my PT Cruiser
    Don't you let the sunset lose us
    Margaret,
    I long for you
    Girl...
    You are my song

    Womanly in all you do
    Taking time to be with you
    Faithful in anointed ways
    God's gift to man

    Helpmate,
    I'm needing you
    Calling on your charm... I'm cool
    Doing what comes naturally
    Becoming man and wife ~



    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~copyright 2004
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful write
    really likes this it was sweet
    flow on...diggin it
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. angelicsage

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    First...allow me to say...I was just thinking about you today...
    and wondering why I hadn't seen a work of art from you in a while...

    Glad to see you back...

    Now...


    This piece...left me all "Starry Eyed"
    in short...
    I loved it...stars and all! :spinstar:
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, we haven't heard from you in a while. This was sweetly laid, sounds like some lady is wonderfully thought of.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done poet
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tite piece...
    nice to see you back brotha...:)
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet!!!! :look:

    we all have been looking for ya....

    how are you ?and this is a beautifull poem you writted here...
    and it was not difficult to read for me......(but keep dropping those deep poems)

    i like youre new funny icon (avatar ).....


    lol but what does it mean...?

    dont tell me you have been in jail / writting poems?



    Love Libertylady...
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Khasm and Sistah Liberty

    Thanks to you, and your support

    I am freed... 1poetsought ~
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice!

    Lovin ya vibe, this is one lucky lady :spin:
     
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