Black Poetry : March thru May

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Apr 21, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    misdemeanors
    missed subpeonas
    battin on the list
    of cleanup
    tempo beneath my wrist
    can speedup
    imagine gifts between us
    open your heart in
    secret
    recover your faith when
    you share it
    the impression it makes
    deep
    you can't spare it
    mystery comin almost too
    close to me
    can barely bare it
    destruction fluxin bindin
    to calamity
    i get embarrassed
    a-tone closer to Kemet
    a-lone closer to comet s
    i zone closer to homage
    praises due an honor to
    the Creator an who He
    deliver thru
    idol you like a father
    one and only
    heaven hold me
    hell is lonely
    fell up in cells
    one too many
    one was plenty
    it's sick
    the intentions of a
    false sentence
    felony
    fell on me
    3 false charges
    gunfire how it started
    appointments of snow-dust
    and bass clefts
    the woman that touched
    my waist left
    crossed me like she played
    me with a thumper
    so i dumped her
    hurricane in a blue isle
    of fire
    hard to retire
    when the volcanoes
    to burn the soul
    is still frozen cold
    in the summa
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...loved it


    Phenomenal...stanza


    Poet...you took me on a journey here...many elements, experiences and emotions...but those were my favorite quotes...Feeling your work! Scribe on...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    feelin this vibe
    flw on.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tis was awesomely tyte and well created
     
  5. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace

    Thanks Angelicsage for ridin with me on that journey... one love

    Mzblkangel- Thanks sis, you know i gotta keep it movin (K.I.M)

    One $$Rich$$, thanks man... one


    love
    /antar
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The tempo, the word play, the flow of this was unique. Nice work.
     
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