Black Poetry : "March Madness"

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how can i have hope

    when she keeps saying nope

    is it possible to cope

    knowing that some other guy's Lever 2000 soap

    is clean enough to rope in her heart?

    while mine is too dirty

    for my actions to be considered flirty

    if only i were more wordy

    even to the point of being nerdy

    we could end this absurdity

    of us being apart

    we're existing in obscurity

    when the connection of our hearts

    could start producing "Purity"

    cold enough to impart

    a little more security

    the next time were together and our heated discussions on whether or not the method to my madness

    is worth a lifetime of sadness

    when our potential for gladness

    is real



    love,

    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rhymes were off the hook here Howard, and i'm lovin the word play too. I think you'll have her hook, line, and sinker.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another tyte scribe that leave me in aweeeee!
     
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