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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 29, 2007.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Buff
    glazed
    handz
    mastered
    da
    pain
    untold
    feeling
    gone
    now
    a
    house
    maid
    in da
    slave
    trade
    another
    massa
    deed
    done
    on
    da
    back
    of my
    ancestor.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We were worked unmercifully in so many ways... I can imagine that the house maid's knees were black and blue, her lower back felt like it was about to snap, and her hands held blisters. A painful scene you've penned with your words poet.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes yes my brethren $$RICH$$

    and payback's a b.............................

    lol

    yes give praise

    to those who came before us


    peace
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tha hotness bruh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you all
    indeed it's still felt yet we have come a long way back from da deep slave trade
    i truely think payback is in store as we continue to gain knowledge
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa i'm floored brotha Poet! Excellent!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise Scry'be your poetic hand is awesome and i enjoy reading u
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too Rich for me again! Mad ups to the double take on tha words. I feel it! Hopefully, we'll eventually get tha oppression/depression up off our sisters backs. To be truthful about it I'm still ticked with the movie Monster's Ball too! We definitely gonna have to do something about it and your piece is one step forward bro for solving our back problems! ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you too about monster ball .....yes we have to make a stand
    do something now so we can free ourselves ..Thankz for da visit and sharing
    mental thoughts .
     
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