Black Poetry : MANY WAYS TO SAY...i love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Feb 11, 2003.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are so many ways to say
    “I love you”
    Without saying the words

    “I love you”

    A gentle caress
    When you’re feeling down
    A hug
    A kiss
    When your head is bound
    By the stress and strife
    Of another life
    When all I want
    Is to make you my wife

    Holding hands
    On a moonlit night
    A warm embrace
    To stave off the fright
    Of a haunted soul
    Chased by the boogie man
    Or, a shoulder to lean
    When your legs are weak
    …and you feel you can’t stand

    “I’m your man”
    sounds much better than
    “I’m Da Man”
    I’ve opened my heart
    That you might understand
    The depths of the love
    It holds for you
    And so many other ways
    Of saying
    “I love you.”
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    awwww!

    :love:

    sweet flow!

    pd
     
  3. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweetness. ;)

    diva08
     
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    yes i agree with diva 8
    its sweeter than sweetness......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller man dat's pure love of heart
    flow again !
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every time I read you I fall into your words
    and experience wonderful! :wink:


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    Very sweet baller.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm, now i wonder if you missed any ways? Nope you have covered all areas. Truly i am honored to read such work and it has been a season since i have taken a moment to read...

    Thanks for reminding me why i visited so much before...

    excellent work my friend...

    one.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY FAMILY...i thank you for the response...and the love

    *heartfelt*

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