Black Poetry : many thanks, e.

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess i missed the scenario...SORRY.

    {sing to the rhythm of CONTAGIOUS
    by the Isley Brothers.}

    at 6a.m.
    i found a piece that said i was the maestro
    wavy lady...rated genius...spitting rhymes and dope flows
    she said i {bleesssed} her with colors from my fountain pen
    she said my words touched her {DEEP }...in her soul within

    i want to {thaannnk} {herrr}...for her kind and generous words
    i want to {teeellll} {herrrr}...that everything she said was heard

    as i {caresssss} cool, smooth ivory's...banging on the keys
    i'd love to tickle, tease, and finally, in the end, i'll please
    every {innccch} of your chorus-pounding, soothing voice
    to let you know that you've come to be my favorite choice

    at the {endddd} of a night of stepping to your mental
    i hope you know your touch is smooth...your caress is gentle
    and, in return, i have just one, little thing to say
    that you've {succeeeeeded} in making an old brutha smile today

    at 6:00a.m.
    i found a piece that said i was the maestro
    written by a lady...baby...i just want you to know
    that when i {neexxt}
    try to bless the page with something new
    i can't {heelllp} but
    to hold this close and think of you

    i want to {thaannk} you for giving me this one big smile
    i want to {telll} you that you're my FATHER's loving child
    so when you {holdd} high your head to say another prayer
    look in your heart...you'll find HIS love and kindness waiting there

    i want to thank you...for all you're doing for the page
    i want to tell you...that you are one fine, lucious babe

    THANK YOU.
     
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    Summer Breeze in My Mind

    I'm one to voice
    where credit is due
    with pen in hand
    I say once again
    its not just sweetness
    the way you write
    its where you take me
    with my eyes close tight

    I drift into a poetic dream
    as I'm inspired
    the thoughts just flow
    into your world
    I seem to go
    the song is mellow
    it moves my soul


    tis a special poet
    who has this gift
    to bring his audience
    to a poetic pitch
    the words you scribe....

    { hypnotize }

    leads me to a natural high
    The Maestro is a fitting name
    to one whose vibes transcends the mind



    Reminds me......
    "Summer breeze makes me feel fine
    blowing through the jasmines in my mind"


    you're welcome Baller......


    Epiphany(c)2001



    :heart:
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhh, yes.....

    Thank you so much, for the nice words
    it was very sweet and beautifully written.
    made me laugh, smile and blush......
    and you know, I love the Isley Brothers...
    How you know that? :lol:
    You have equally made my day....

    :toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bowing...

    humbly.

    {i remember those summer breezes:)}

    THANKS AGAIN, e.
     
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