Black Poetry : Many Tears

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  1. MyTlita

    MyTlita Active Member MEMBER

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    there have been so many tears in my eyes
    I wonder if the Lord has heard my cries
    my heart is filled with pain and sorrow
    Lord will I be able to face tomorrow
    If I had a flower for every tear I have cried
    the world would be my garden
    still I continue to pray and seek the Lord
    I will not allow my heart to harden
    will it rain again today
    or will the sun finally shine my way
    will the grass be green
    will the flowers bloom
    Lord will there be a break through soon
    could deliverance be on it's way
    nevertheless I will continue to seek your face
    could it be that you have heard my cries
    and my prayers are soon to be answered
    or could it be that you are teaching me
    to turn pressure into power
     
  2. Envy

    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice. Keep holding on, test & trials come but he will never forsake you. Keep enduring while your faith strengthens.

    E :spinstar:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heard

    he's listening,
    and teaching u things.
    about the way their gonna be,
    and the way that they seem.
    but thru all that you go thru,
    never forget that someone always cares.
    even if you can't see them,
    just know that they're there............(i'm here for you)(flow on) :read:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LONGING 4 DA UNLOVABLE

    arms outstretched,
    grasping for the untouchable.
    wanting to embrace,
    one who i know is unlovable.
    but the galaxy knows not,
    for it's not far enough to understand.
    that i'm infatuated with,
    the unlovable man.
    and i peer everyday,
    into his soul of wrath.
    and even though it's one of hate,
    to reach it---still i grasp.
    bcuz the pain all pinned up inside,
    is hiding what's really there.
    and that's the love he holds inside,
    but i don't know where.
    so i am like a flower,
    and he's the sun rays.
    i wait and watch,
    and pray.
    that this unlovable man,
    will come from behind the gray clouds or think about it.
    cuz i long for him like the plant,
    longs for photosynthesis......
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice poem. Hope to hear more from you. That was very deep and passionate. :peace:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    welcome to destee.com
    likes this poem
    very passionate and deep
    flow on...
    hope to read more
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Very nice thought provoking intro.

    Remain steadfast, cuz as they say, He may not come when U call, but He's always on time.

    Usually, when U I falter in my faith due 2 trials beating me down, I think of the story of Job...

    Keep 'em comin.
     
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    I felt your words, this was so emotionally put. God hears your ache, and will tend to you, seems like a long wait sometimes, I know. But it will come, keep the faith. Welcome to destee!!
     
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    deeply felt all this scribe here well done poet
     
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    Hey this is tight, and I really feel what you're sayin. Welcome to the Destee family, MyTlita.
     
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