Black Poetry : Many Men

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 4, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    This fire that burns within in me
    No man could ever ease

    It's not that I don't want love
    it's just that love can be disease

    It's not the lust I'm after
    Can refrain from lusts temptation

    It's just that oneness means so much more
    Then waters that run from a lovers' sensation

    We all must follow where we're led
    Choose a path in life

    And the path of fire that I follow
    Is not of a domestic wife

    For I love many men
    But I'm not in love with love

    I am in love with one so to speak
    But one is you and me

    But one is us and love is us
    In love with unity

    Many men they chase bait
    Even if it is not thrown

    Many men the say
    They are tired of being alone

    Many men they misinterpret
    They do not understand

    Many men will never realize
    The woman that I am

    Until the day I find a way
    to unite body, mind and spirit

    This fire will burn continuously
    It is already love and I feel it


    One Love
     
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    We each have to do what is right for us. Some paths take us to destinations that surprise us, some take us to where we feel we ought to be. This scribe makes the reader pause and reflect, and I like that.
     
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    Being in Search of,to find is Often never Fullfilled
    So finding Proves You were never in search of
    Love is Precious
    So precious as the Love of ones self
    Many men will never seize
    But one May fall inside
    Love to Love
    Looking never see's:)
    Great Write sis...
    IDK i was trying to repsond with regular words:?: ....it didnt work
    Later Miss... LADY!!!
    smh
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    Miss Lady I like this flow. One love to u
    Intellect = spirit
    Aware is your sprit, to touch your mind. Your flow brings it out within u.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da fire of oneself knowing love to love where as men not know
    yet da fire burns continuely wit a true passion that one day
    men would understand the beings beyond lust and become bait-less

    Awesome write love the spirit of this creation of the mind that speaks clear & loud
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's a spoonful of soul to read and I think instinct may have thrown the male off when it comes to grasping love. By nature we are competitors and providers and not accustomed to providing love. We learn that with time and relationships. But I think your poems really illustrates and confirms that men can't make love to a woman nor can a woman make love to a man. All we can really do is share being in a moment of love like two people standing in the rain while the gates of heaven pour emotions onto them both. Who knows it hella complicated at times, but this was deep true testimony. Well said sistagyrl!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I am so honor'd

    that you have shared such special words with me...

    I am truly honor'd and truly love you all very much...

    more than I can express in a word...

    I mean the word love takes on so many interpretations... but what I feel for us is so much more then any expression of sound...

    it is so deep......

    thank you all again for reading me...

    one
     
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