Black Poetry : many men

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have decided for the 2nd book im currently writing to focus on the male perspective
    my first one had i little bit more feminine influence

    holla at yo boy
    im going to go read some flows now

    Yo fifty Many Men

    I need to borrow this

    Many men
    Many men wish death on me
    Many men hope I don’t succeed
    Be surprised buts it’s a lot of n***** hoping I bleed

    Many men
    Many men wish I could be osama
    Trial me if they could for the blame of they drama

    Many men
    Many men wish me to have a nervous breakdown
    The men next door, not the ones around town

    Many men
    Many men, invest in me
    Incest to me, my ancestry, bring out the best in me

    Many men
    Many men will shake your hand
    The same when your lame, will shake your wallet man

    Many men
    Many men want the proceeds to possess my possession
    I guess that’s why porches were created to watch my procession

    Many men
    Many men if they had the key to my body, would steal my heart
    Now I wonder why my relationships contain no heart

    Many men
    Many men, invest in me
    Incest to me, my ancestry, bring out the best in me

    Many men
    Many men could write but don’t print
    A lot of my folks can’t walk but wanna sprint

    Many men
    Many men take my place of peace
    A lot of cats wanna ice and wanna take my piece

    Many men
    Many men cry behind closed doors
    A lot of men give me sores, cause the intolerant heat in my pores
     
  2. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    this was tyte!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte scribe feel ya on dis one
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heard beats to this one.
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...really tight
     
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