Black Poetry : mantra: rush-over (dedicated to ga_sunshyne)

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  1. mensahpoetic

    mensahpoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    my feet burn from
    tunisian sands
    ...can you,
    isis,
    soak them in your balm for me?

    i am weary from battles away from you
    ...may I
    gently spread your legs & find my
    solace?

    i wonder about the first time...we kissed in the future...when i felt your breasts...yet...to comfort me in our hugs. I haven't looked into your eyes...and still...i find that you have clairvoyance...voyaging into parts of me...yet...to be lived...but they live for you. you are becoming my woman...queen...better yet, my bestfriendlover...i can't keep my dreams dry...any longer...when i think of your frame...quietly moaning...on top of me...and etching yourself into my skin...my visions become wet...and they beg...for you to bathe in them...

    my hands
    ache
    ...from trying to maintain a hold on happiness
    ...can you,
    spirit,
    allow me to let go around you
    ...and finally be free?

    my heart pitter-pats
    and keeps the secret of you
    lodged
    in my throat in serene suffocation
    ...can i
    gently
    open your lips
    give you
    the perfect kiss, let my tongue
    touch you right...there...
    can i, darling
    ...so i can finally breathe
    and exist?

    laid out on your queen bed...nothing but panties around your waist...and poetry...being stirred down...there, moistening for me. i can smell the words being baked in...between...legs that demand light nibbles...and massages. you smile...noticing my growing fondness...to **** you...and maintain our intimacy...at the same time. I...slide between your thighs...slightly pressing up against your door...and i cannot hold back my call...as you...back-massage-moans out of me...grab hold of me, darling...and slip me in.

    my eyes
    water
    ...from the pain of dead friends & loneliness
    ...can i,
    analogangel...
    cry on your shoulders and
    be manly
    ...at the same time?

    my mind wanders in different thoughts
    ...do you mind if I
    focus all of my genius &
    brilliance upon you
    ...and hope to create something
    eternally ours to protect
    and cherish?

    i can feel you...gyrating your grinds...onto me...slowly...opening yourself up more...so i can penetrate....mmmmm, deeper. my hands...parting your *** as you still...ride me quietly. *sigh*...mmmmm...can i...please...sit up & put your left nipple...into my mouth? scratch you on your back? perhaps...be free with you...to possibly shed a tear...if the intimacy takes us there?

    i want you to...put all of me into your mouth...swirl my blackness...salivate over my hardness...lick up & down my egyptian mentality.

    I want you to...watch my expressions & smile at my...struggle for air...when my poetry perhaps...taps the back of your throat...and let the late night air...whistle into you...when your *** silenty spreads...a little...a little...mmmmm, a little more.

    I want you to...touch yourself...in anticipation of my slow...thick...push into your *****.

    during our first...pharaoh night...my mind is begging to send the signal...to my ****...so i might perhaps...splash the inside of you...with pent-up emotion. make me cum, love...please...i want it to...rush over you.


    my mouth is parched
    from lonely nights without my
    Nile
    ...can i
    fall to my knees & drink you
    let your
    **** swell on my bottom lip
    ...can i, so i may
    replenish my energy?

    my fingers
    long
    to be stained with your ink
    ...may i
    push back your fleshy lips &
    slowly, and with love, rotate
    my middle finger,
    thrusting it
    ...may i touch that spot,
    please?

    say it with me, boo...

    i am your mensah
    you are my mantra
    i am your mensah
    you are my mantra
    i am your mensah
    you are my
    ...beautfiulblackwoman
    bouncing playfully on top of me
    ...wanting...
    to pump it all out of me
    ...needing...
    to feel my orgasm contractions
    ...desiring...
    to quake hard
    mmmmm...and make my waist wet...
    and soaking our sheets in
    sinfully delectible deeds.

    i...am...loving you...

    and your sex...is becoming an extension...of my

    deep need to lick your cream

    ...and whisper to you...

    *whisper*
    you...got...me...
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mymensah.


    you... got... me. :kiss:

    you know how much i adore "mantra"!! :)
    & if everyone on the page took the time to read
    it to the end... they would love it too! :) it's a
    wonderful peace... even with all the ****'s... :lol:
    & it's part of my top 3 "pieces written by you for me"
    collection. thank you for posting it!

    i'm loving you. (endless-ly)

    elayne.
     
  3. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I bow to the eloquence...this masterwork takes my mind to the birthplace of civilization, just east of Eden, and brings me to my knees on the banks of the Nile.

    Go head on and testify! "mantra"....whoooooooo! Too Tough!!

    Peace

    Saleem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! simply lovely dis piece is touchie..........
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the poetic prowess is clear in this heah joynt.

    i'm mos def diggin' it....
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go'n and handle bizniss!

    sheeeeeeeiiiiiiit!

    Bert
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mensah

    this was well worth the read. Gone layne with yo bad self... that's why I be takin notes:D



    One
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!!!

    This piece is on like that Mensah!!!

    True :hot:!!!!!

    Dug it lots!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Doubt

    Gotta say this was worth reading... Best chill, GA already had the Big Head!!! lol

    Dig the Flow
    Hot ****!
    Reas
     
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