Black Poetry : MAN'S DILEMMA

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Choices
    waves in basis
    pits of sorrow
    blaming
    casting fate
    God
    circumstance
    calling
    man's
    curses his self
    unto deeath hell
    created
    by da tongue
    weaves his own web
    traped
    at times wit no escape
    blindly eyez wide shut
    one's
    evolve,intricate labyrinth
    of passages twisting
    twriling our own ignorance
    caged in our prison
    of darkness and dread
    man stumble about
    eons and eons
    sailing in our mental confusion
    yet drowning in our
    perpetual gloom
    searching for an exit
    forth da light of truth
    we bath in da oils
    as we journey into a lead
    on a path of spiritual
    freedom
     
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    Within a maze of confusion and chaos, how many dead ends will we come to, how long will it take and how much effort will it take to make it to the other side? Well expressed poet.
     
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    yes watz many question yet not answered which bring man's dilemma thank you
     
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    still hindered by the tales of man's dilemma makes one wonder
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes brethren

    the freedom is a must

    i see how this could get in the way lol

     
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    yeah! bruh one whom listen more and speak less will learn da route to freedom
     
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    youve been on a pretty serious tip lately brother Rich :read:
    hope all is well with ya :)
     
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    I'm good sis just been in a slump somewhat and searching for answers within me .
    Thankz for feeling me Trin..
     
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    as much as i was pulled into the poem...

    ...this line grabbed me more:

    "yeah! bruh one whom listen more and speak less will learn da route to freedom"

    too often, our mouth get in the way of hearing...therefore, learning. and we find ourself wondering about the directions given to get us out of the maze...leaving us floundering in the darkness, hoping for someone to ask a question...when all we had to do was to close our mouth, in the first place...and listen.

    I HEAR YOU, $$RICH$$MAN.
     
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    :SuN034: IT IS ONLY YOUR PERCEPTION, THERE ARE NO DILEMMAS MAN CANNOT UNRAVEL....
     
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