Black Poetry : MANLY HANDS... (for Mr. garlicsalt)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Manly Hands caressed my face
    with poise and grace
    one finger tip across my lips
    my sexual reflexes are stimulated
    so i part them

    your finger slips….in my mouth
    so i tongued massaged it
    until you pulled it out

    Manly Hands stroked my ears and my neck
    the sensation makes my nipples erect
    im feeling perplexed and vexed
    anticipating the thrust of your sex

    Manly Hands fondling my breast
    switching between rhythms
    nipples past erect
    soft and gentle hard and rough
    each pleasing to me
    don’t stop don’t stop…..
    i cant get enough of your Manly Hands

    Manly Hands grabbed me around my waste
    laid me down and strategically placed

    my body

    we both know its about to get
    erotically naughty

    lookn’ in your eyes
    u know i want THAT…

    Manly Hands run past my navel
    and stops
    parted my thighs
    proceeds to stroke and kiss
    the insides

    my eyes become wide

    open

    want a visual of your
    Manly Hands teasing and stroking
    my split blowing on my cl!t

    im moaning oh ****

    Manly Hands gripped my knees
    im yelling
    baby yes please please please

    me

    you dive
    deep deep deep
    into my sensual sea
    im feeding your feasting

    Manly Hands inserted that finger
    inside my wet box
    never moved still positioned
    in between my hot creamy spot

    Pulling it in and out
    Drinking to the last drop

    Manly Hands flipped me on top
    im mounted upon
    your throbbing co*ck
    im in my comfort zone
    ridin’ your stiff hard bone

    Manly Hands directing my glide
    you feel my wetness
    my ocean is tiding

    Manly Hands pulling my hair
    our thrusts matching t!t for tat
    my a*z is jiggling
    cuz your Manly Hands
    prefers it like that

    our hearts beat stronger not weaker
    i placed my
    Lady Fingers
    on your back
    nails clawing
    my hips are twisting and see sawing

    Manly Hands grab my breast
    and started knawing
    Lady Fingers
    still clawing
    deeper and deeper

    Manly Mands slaps my a*z my grind quickens
    my thrust no longer tantalizing and slow
    i begin to do my nasty pelvic throw
    simulations like a stripper on a pole
    dropin’ it like its hot not cold

    now we cant seem to hold
    back the momentum of exstacy
    that’s about to attack you and me
    so our bodies
    release release release

    Manly Hands meading and molding
    every inch of my curvaceous frame
    and i will never look at you the same
    becasue i cant remember
    how many times i came
    those Manly Hands are to blame

    this is type of **** that happens when
    your Manly Hands touch my Lady Fingers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely tyte and divine
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Oh MY! Gurrrrl! lol


    I'm actually kinda speechless right now! This was some ultimate kinda up-front-and-personal, 3-D IMAGERY for ya!


    You did tha dang thang!




    *Is it warm in here or is it just me?!*
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sizzlin poetess! Nuff said...
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cherry:
    Dang girl you be diggn' deep.
    Thanks for the read.


    watz:
    I guess this one got by you somehow...lol
    It was inspired by gsalt's "Lady Fingers" piece.
    Your luv and support is always greatly apprecited.

    Much Luv
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SWEET!

    Very Sultry 4EVERLUV

    This flow got by me too
    Thanks for the flow.

    Cherryblossom
    Thanks for bring this back up... I like this very much.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my dayum!

    "Manly Hands" are one of my three favorite things on a man.
    :run:<--- me running out of here to a cooler atmosphere. :)
    Girl "Lady Fingers" must be a hellova hot piece!

    You rocked this one hot!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    Whewwwww Sistah friend, you got it hot in heyeah!!!!

    You done outdided yoself wit this one, you on fiyah gyrl
    and you took no prisoners....lol!

    Excellent , 4eva!


    epiphany:heart:
     
  9. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do so much want to post "Lady Fingers" in reposnse to this piece. You brought out the whip for this one :whip: This was a hot piece ... hotter than a brush fire in the middle of july. Nicely written pretty lady ... nicely written indeed ... *muah*
     
  10. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee:
    Thank you very much for
    those sweet words as always.

    coco:
    Gurrl.....I know huh....lol
    I have a manly hands fetish also.
    Just something about them.
    You really must read gsalt's "Lady Fingers"
    and you will see....When I read it....
    lets just say it inspired me in a lot of ways
    Thanks for the Luv and the read.

    piphany:
    (smh) Gurrl....when I went back and
    read it I was like....daaannnng.....
    I was flown' like that. lol ?But as I
    suggested to coca you have to read
    "Lady Fingers" to get the full effect.
    As always my soul sis, your luv and
    support is much appreciated.

    gsalt....gsalt...
    The man that made it all happen.
    It really brings a smile to my face
    to know that you approve of my
    female spin on your pen. "Lady Fingers"
    is a TOTALY HOTT PIECE of PROPERTY!!!!
    I remember reading it over and over and over.
    You know I luv the way you do what you do
    when you do what you do. *muah* back at you.

    Peace and Luv to you all
    4Ever:heart:
     
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