Black Poetry : Man, why did I **** that trick?

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm pregnant at the early age of 14
    I'm not saying this just to be mean
    But the baby's daddy is 26
    Not only that but he's mixed
    I told him that the baby was his
    I started crying and he even gave me a kiss
    Afterwards he started trippin'
    Told me that I deserved a wippin'
    He said the baby wasn't his and he knew that as a fact
    Lookin' in his face I didn't know how to react
    He said that he had been tryin' to have children with his wife for the longest
    And everytime they tried they missed
    But I know he is the baby's daddy because he was my first and my last
    By that I mean he was the only one I gave my @ss
    Sure we always wore a condom
    I even told him to wear a extra to make the semen numb
    Man, why did I f**k that trick

    him

    Man, I been going with her since she was twelve
    And yeah, I f**ked her til she was pell
    But what can you say she was nothin' but a freak
    She sucked my d**k til it felt weak
    Then she come up to me talkin bout I'm the baby's daddy
    Her stomach was big even made her look a little fatty
    Come sobbin' and cryin'
    I could tell she was lying
    I know I wore my rubbers
    And she was nothin' but another lover
    If it is mine she need to get rid of it
    Cause she crazy if she think I'm going to take care of it .....she can suck my d**k
    Plus the last time we f**k was a month ago
    The b***h is nothin' but a hoe
    If I didn't have no children by my wife
    What would make her think I want that baby in my life
    Man, why did I f**k that trick
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, these things go on all the time, and where I live it's a everyday thing. Where people have regrets of their wrong doings and throw it back into their lovers face.
    Love and Peace,
    Foxy..................
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, and let me know what you think about this flow.
     
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    Foxylady30315 ... Hello Sister and Welcome !!! ... :wave:

    This is a very moving peace, so true as many of our young ladies (babies) get caught up, taken advantage of, mistreated by older men that know better. Thank you for telling and sharing the story. I just have one concern ... we have a banned words list and it wasn't created to hinder anyone's flow, but to try and keep our home wholesome, while still allowing us to flow as freely as possible. All of this to say, Sister, if you could ... please keep the banned words to a minimum and if at all possible, don't use them in the title of your peaces. I'm going to edit the title for you this time, removing the banned word.

    Thank You Sister For Joining Us and Making This Your Home.

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    This was pretty interesting and a creative way of telling your story.
     
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    your're right foxy
    this ish happens everyday
    your flow was straight as hell
    giving both perspectives
    on da same situation...
    keep da ink wet
    cause this is as real as it gets
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sorry Destee for using the wrong words, but sometimes you get so fed up with the situation it comes out the way it's not suppose to. Please forgive me sister, it will never happen again. Thanks for letting me know. As for all the rest of the replies it's good that you are hearing me out. I just got so tired of all this kind of stuff when it happened to my cousin a few days ago.

    Love and Peace,
    Foxy.........................
     
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    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin this.... very interesting, I have a poem similar in tone that talks about how I think my parents' relationship may have been before I was born, and my father started tripping on my mom. Sometimes I think I'll never know what truly happened, it's always one person's word against the other, other times I think I don't really care...
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think everybody wants to know how their parents reacted when they found out they were exspecting a baby.While others claim to have been happy, others on the other hand are not so lucky, as talked about in my flow.

    Love and Peace,
    Foxy..........................

    P.S
    Destee, I am truly sorry for the words I used, again. I didn't know there was a banned words list. But now I know, and in the future I will try to refrain from using these as much as possible.
     
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    Hey foxy....
    reading your flow...
    a 26 year old knows whats up..
    the 14 year old gave her trust...
    you bring to light true awakens

    Faith is our strenght
    United we are strong
    Peace my sister
     
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