Black Poetry : Man Of My Dreams

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This man of my dreams--
    He be
    moon covered
    with a chestnut hue
    and raven-haired
    Inaccessible,
    just as a distant shore

    This man of my dreams--
    He be
    living here
    next to the heart
    -- A reason. A dream.
    Undefined, yet real

    Moon covered pebbles
    Shining among plains
    A chestnut cluster
    deeply driven--
    etched like a wound...
    A rose, a moan
    or a crimson scar

    A luminosity or a 'far away' spark

    This man of my dreams--
    He be
    moon covered
    with a chestnut hue
    and raven-haired

    to me ... he be

    ... still as distant
    as the stars




    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. poeticdelight

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    o.k sista'

    the man of your dreams

    pd
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    N2urSo'ja

    never out of reach, never out of touch
    dreams of the man, dreams of the wants
    no if and or whats
    feelin' the mist of love

    sprinkling - spraying the innercore
    the flush of love leaves cries for more
    arms yearn to reach out and settle score
    as an encore

    mythical fiqure of sorts
    a shadow that nobody ever saw
    overview reveals a mutual awe
    a feel never felt before


    DSSNY
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis man of yours

    ya dream mate of everlasting
    ya working da hell out dis board today
    but keep it coming gurl i be lovin dis :toast:
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd

    Yes ma'am.... I'm still lookin' 4 him! :lol:

    Thanks for the read!

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well alright now! :D... Tell me all about him would you please....:lol:

    Thanks for the dance So'ja

    always :heart:

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL@$$RICH$$

    :lol: You are a complete mess!! :lol: I thought I would fall out when I read your response... Brotha... I'm just tryin' to make up for lost time for the months I was on a hiatus! :lol::lol:

    Or.... maybe I'm just giving you a break from workin' the boardz ova time! :D :wink:

    Much :heart:

    N2
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...this was as gentle as wind blown rain
    in spring... i loved it.

    Oh! & you do know that dreams come
    true... right?? :)

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you seeing him...

    and, feeling him, specially...

    but may I say that when he steps into reality and "touches" you so righteously...only thing you might recognize, is that "feeling", specially....

    go head on, sis! I love when you make me dare to approach the door to the attic...

    a
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .....don't mean to sound so..... well, you know.... "same ol' same-ish", but sistah....

    You know I do thank you! Reallly I do!! :lol:

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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