Black Poetry : MAN O MAN (THIS IS A LIL' HEATED...SORRY)

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  1. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He showed up in town un-******' announced.
    He says, "I'm in the area lookin' for your house."
    I'm holding the phone to my ear in a state of shock. :jawdrop:
    I wanna bust this cat's head open with a box of rocks.
    I haven't spoken to him in a long time,
    so I have no clue what could be going through his mind.

    He comes to my house, jumps out his car, empty handed and standing tall.
    No flowers, no candy, no hug, nothing at all.
    Happy Valentines day to you, I'm here.
    This dude didn't come close to seeing the disgust in my face :puke: , he** I don't think he even cared.
    It's 11p.m. and I have to be at work the next day at 6a.m.
    I hope this ni$$a don't think he stayin'!

    He follows me upstairs to my apartment.
    "Take off your shoes," I yell. "This is new carpet."
    He came all the way from 91st to the 'burbs.
    Didn't want to be rude just yet and kick him to the curb.
    He lays around telling stupid stories, :boring:
    Ignoring the fact that I have to get up early.
    I'm getting a little heated inside,
    Hoping he's smart enough to pick up on my negative vibe.

    I was sending waves of that sh**.
    But he wasn't trying to get it.
    I finally asked, "What's your agenda for tonight?"
    He gives this stupid *** answer like I was going for the bite.
    He says, "I'm just trying to be me."
    I looked at him and said, "What's that sh** mean?"
    After several minutes of lame *** conversation, he finally got to the point.

    "I wanna make love to you," came at 2:22.
    "Is that what you came all this way to do?"
    "Yeah," he replied.
    I was so frustrated, I felt like dying.
    I was pi$$ed needless to say.
    So I had to do things MY WAY. :yo:

    "First off, you don't love me. :nono:
    Second of all, at the moment I'm a true lady."
    He looked at me a little shady. :confused:
    I gave him that look and he realized it was Aunt Flo time.
    He strectched it out in a drop of a dime.
    He said it was time for him to go, said he had to be somewhere early and grabbed his coat.
    I laughed a little :laugh: and showed his *** to the do'.

    I think I've failed to mention when he thought I was sleep he helped himself to my Koolaid.
    I was ticking like a live hand grenade. :bazooka:
    What's a woman to do? :uzi:


    What's wrong with folk man....It was a couple of months ago, but thinking about it just puts me in a bad mood.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's ova now so let it rest in the old forgotten memories
    vent , express and release ....................try not to blast
    around dem astreic words wit dem $$ i see u and no N words :nono:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You related the story well, smh, hopefully he'll forget your address...keep written, haven't heard from you in a few.
     
  4. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sorry Rich...I know better. I just didn't know how to change my words...It's actually a whole whole lot better than what I had it. But ok...I do know better.
     
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    He may not have known what time it was when he came...but I think he knew what time it was when he left...and it's good to know 'you held your grounds.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks queen...I had to hold my ground...I'm only starting to realize at 26 years of age how weird people are.
     
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    smh

    What nerve....smh still.
    Well hope he got the point and maybe he wont ever return sis....
    Thanks for sharing this... :peace:
     
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    yo...this was raw...
    some catz think that they can get away with murder...smh
    you are a betta person then me...cause i would have kept da door shut...:lol:
    nice to see you back at home sis...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    LOL!
    Don't you just
    hate when they
    show up uninvited!
    Tyte drop!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know what, I think you and Khasm need to do a collab, for real! This is tight. :D
     
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