Black Poetry : Man: Do you know how to treat a man? A womans response.

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lets see..
    Feed the ego..
    let him know how great he is
    only if it is true,
    feed the stomache..
    But only if momma tought you how to,
    then feed his sex drive..
    let him know you are ready to serve..
    his.. hall you can eat buffet
    let him be a man,
    but take control as much as possible.
    Show him you can handle things as well,
    inpire him.. not only to suceed in career..
    but to excel in life hence..
    put your faith in God,
    never accepting what is handed out,
    as what can be obtained.
    Listen to his every word,
    dont you dare miss a beat!
    Follow these directions properly,
    and the alter you shall meet.
    That man will know,
    you are a rare find,
    But ask him this one question,
    before you sign on that dotted line?
    Woman:: Do you know how to treat a Woman?
    Because,
    Even though we did everything right,
    things arent always as they seem,
    not every man,
    who has a good woman,
    knows how to treat her,
    like a Queen!
    :garbage:

    :kiss2:
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write on my poet
    write on !
    I like they way you laid this one out.
    That block seems to be moving....Huh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one to live by this was on point
     
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    So true, if a man does get what he desires, can he treat her the way she needs to be treated? Right on point poet, flow on.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Intrepid, Rich, Watzinaname

    thank yall.. i think the block is almost out the door.. finally!
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honor
    Friend
    Respect
    silence
    support
    spirituality
    And a lot of love
    encouragement
    knowledge
    wisdom
    understanding
    a shoulder to cry
    A smile to laugh
    just being self
     
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    peace,

    True indeed PM........................well put!!!!!!!!

    peace
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank yall for bringin this one back, it was one of the peices during my horrible writers block.. i really thought it wasnt one of my best.. but i was like dang.. is it that bad? thanks once again.
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well put... i just wonder if their is more than that?... based on spiritual faith.. and Gods' good grace. May he have mercy on the souls he unite.
     
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    love this flo girl flow on sista.
     
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