Black Poetry : Man And His Playmate

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man And His Playmate

    Today's our day babygirl.
    We goin out for a drive,
    Maybe watch the sunrise.
    Check out the scenery
    Enjoy it's splendid greenery.
    I'll take you to a special place
    find a parking space.
    listen to some music, as
    I caress your body.
    Smooth gentle strokes up your back,
    then down the front.
    Making sure to hit those hidden spots.
    I'll call you that sweet nickname
    you love to hear-Babygirl
    Then go through the hood
    so all my homeboys can see
    how good you look.
    See how I open your door,
    everyone can tell how I adore you.
    When all my *****'s come at you
    I tell'em look, but don't touch.
    They think I'm buggin. I know
    they jealous, so I just shrug'em.
    ****! Look at the time.
    I'm late.
    ****! Now I gotta comtemplate
    on what Imma tell my mate.
    Can't tell her I was at the carwash
    AGAIN.:D

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    U on this theme ain'tcha sis? Don't be too disillusioned. Once we know the truth about certain thangs; that's supposed to equip us with the wisdom to check the 'signs' (and they are obvious)....and keep steppin.'

    Thanks for the message ~ I hope we can all see our role(s) in these scenarios (at one time or another)...and correct that mess!

    "ONELOVE" begins with LOVE OF GOD and RESPECT FOR SELF. ANYthing less is bogus.


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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Apologies

    Alyce, I think my poem wasn't clear enough. I apologize. Babygirl is his car. However, what you speak of is reality. The signs are usually obvious. Thanks for your splash of wisdom. :)

    If men (some) would give their women the attention they give to their cars, their relationships would be a smoother ride. Coco
     
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