Black Poetry : Mamma,s Stroke

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stroking her hands through my hair..
    and said..


    I,ve been there..
    But dont be in doubt ,dont doubt yourselve..
    at least you dare how to love someone .......{stroke}

    i know youre thinking they all left the stage and you
    are standing there feeling empty .......
    naked.......................................................{stroke}

    But remember you are still standing...
    and One day there will be someone ..
    who will stand there next to you ................{stroke}

    Dry youre eyes my child save ...
    them for the day you will meet him maybe
    you,ve already met him maybe you dont.. {stroke}

    But get up youre strong you know.....
    get up now show must go on...
    Hush my girl ...
    hush........................................................{stroke}

    I wished i could have safed you from the pain..
    i wished i could have sparred you all of this...
    but this is sumthing that comes to almost..
    every woman...



    and man.................................................{stroke]


    i know..

    i know..


    hush...

    hush...


    ssss




    {stroke}
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this Peace i feel in this flow sis
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this drop
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice shhhhh!!!
    love it keep flowing sistah
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    Simply beautiful.

    I liked the way U put this down.

    Keep doin' what makes U the U that U are, cuz I'm diggin' it.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing like the calming caress of a mother's hand...very soothing scribe.
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Beautifull ones :heart:

    yes whats in a name..and i wish she was here to do that..

    but hopefully in tha future she will...
    we are going to reunite..soon.


    cause
    i missed that...
     
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