Black Poetry : Mami's Love

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  1. phynxofkemet

    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To My Son

    To My Son,

    I love you as the day is long,
    Then into the night time too
    I will stand up and be strong
    Because my love is true
    Show you paths of knowledge
    And the wisdom in your heart
    Blessed by your ancestors
    And protected from the start

    I love you my baby,
    For you have I dreamed
    And now in my life
    Your light so brightly beams
    I know I became a womban
    The moment that you made
    Your presence known to me
    And on the magic day

    My child, my only son
    I reach further & become
    A better womban with
    The rising of the sun
    Lessons I’ve learnt
    Tonight the karma
    Is burnt
    On the pyre
    No fears, no sorrows
    Ka’s on fire
    and living our truth
    and daring to touch
    abundance & pride
    which means so much

    In the story of life
    That you and I share
    Always, my child
    To show you I care
    Will I reach into heaven
    Or venture abroad
    To give you our legacy
    And keep you from fraud

    My baby, my son,
    Forever please stay
    The love of my life
    Every mother’s day

    :heart::hearts1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blessin be upon thy name for the true love of a mother is love like this on display
    I honor and respect every piece of you sis ........May he grow to be all you instill
    within him and the knowledge to forever honor thy MOTHER with humble love
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Phynx...

    This piece warmed my soul deep! The bond between a mother and child is an amazing experience. My son is no longer a baby in the physical sense, but he'll always be my baby in my heart. Thanks for sharing this dedication with us. Happy Mommy's Day!

    BTW, I enjoyed hearing you and your son's expressions last night in chat:)


    Be blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raw, pure, beautiful...that essence of loe for your son poured onto the page for all to witness. How wonderful, your son has a special mom. Happy Mother's Day sister. :)
     
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    Wow...

    How beautiful, Phynx...

    Truly a poem every Mother can relate to, the love of her children...

    I love the way you brought Mother's Day from this angle.

    Very thoughtful...:terrific:


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    Wow, it's so very breath taking to see/hear/witness the bond between a parent and their seeds...touching. Thanks for sharing this.
     
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    Good for you

    i feel your pride

    only a great mom with great intentions can write something like this

    give praise

    i hope you enjoyed your day
     
  8. phynxofkemet

    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We had a peace filled day

    thank you everyone for your comments!
     
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    thas whas up right there....
    this was a beautiful dedication....
    i hope u show this to ur son when he's old enough
    to overstand....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    A mothers love is an entity in and of itself indeed sister :read:

    I thought this was a beautiful piece

    I think its lovely that he has a mother like you in his life sister :)

    I am not surprised that you are talented here as well :)
     
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