Black Poetry : Mama Was A Whore

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Young in this world just a lil gurl, sweet as a chocolate vanilla swirl.
    Pimp asked her kindly what is your name Darlin?
    She responded Jalissa but call me carmen.
    Her mother was a whore,for her health couldn't aford.
    So when he came to get her baby she just opened the door.
    She didnt know what was gone happend next,til' he said the lil ones coochie is best.
    He forced himself on her body and settled in her nest.
    She cried when she read the results of the HIV test.
    Positive as a plus sign in Algebra,due to her circumstance there was no way out for ha.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    SensualReality

    Sad...very sad....but all too true.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
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    this was so raw and emotionally provoking...
    that I hope this isn't true...smh
    children are subjected to way to much violence
    these days...where they are seeing it or being
    subjected to it...

    eye/emotion opening scribe...
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both and no this is not a true story,for me,but it is happening somewhere
    :grouphug:
     
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    wow, painful emotions.......nice flow
     
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    Gee...wow..as everyone said previously this was very emotional. I'm unfortunately sure that it happens...I met someone years ago who said her own mother turned her out....my God. Anyway, this scribe just reached out and touched the horrible possibilities of this.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx to the both of you :cool:
     
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