Black Poetry : Mal practiced Love

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When life took a turn for the worse
    I was in a place called ICU
    Not in the special rooms unit
    But in heaven where I-C-U
    It was like playing I-spy
    Because
    I c your face
    I c your eyes
    I c your lips
    I c an earth angel
    The diagnosis was so simple I did it myself
    I knew I had fallen in love, was internally bleeding
    With you being my only cure
    Yet all this time you talked about wanting to get to know me better has only turned out to be your love mal-practiced
    Because even though you put your arms around me
    Even though you never really felt this pulse 160 over 80
    And even though you stared in my eyes with your stethoscope
    You never saw my heart dripping
    And even though you made me open up my mouth to say Ahh!
    You never heard my spoken words of desire, I love you
    Instead you turned away with your charts
    Telling me with your body you were through
    Then left me here to code blue
    But the moment you walked out the door
    Was the very moment I began to fight.
    It was the moment I told my heart to beat again
    Because you weren’t worth it.
    It was the very second I stopped dying and
    Started living again
    To find a true love that was worth dying for.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhh wow love this piece Tha Emissary flo on
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oh yes yes yes !
    this runs in passionate warmth
    flow head and good to feel ya pen again
    Tha Emissary
     
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    When I heard the alarm, to send in code blue...
    I knew I somehow ...had to rescue you
    I immeditately caught all your dripping blood,
    and rapidly pumped your heart full of love.

    I brought your pulse to it's normal rate,
    I know the timming was merely our fate.
    you're now in the arms of Nurse "code red"
    the one who brought you back...from the dead!​
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tha-Emissary:
    Welcome Back!!!!
    Your pen has been missed.
    I just love this piece. It started out
    so good, then she let you go code blue
    shame on her. Im glad you found
    something/someone worthy of your
    efforts. I really enjoyed this piece.:)

    Much Luv
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice play on words and visual poetics--I was touched by the sentiment--well done--Amun-Ra
     
  7. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Preciate All Yaw'll

    Rich its always good to hear from ya and keep going strong bro!
    4-Ever thanks for the warm welcome back, I'll try not to stay gone so long if I can ever keep from burning up stuff on the stove. Nevar hey girl I thank you too sista and I glad you liked it, but as they say you ain't seen nothing yet. Now Queentswana I'm a honored by your encore. I think I'm a start calling you code red cause that follow up was amazing as a near death experience. Last but not least mad shout to Amun Ra. I'm definetly feeling that tight ancestorial pen name. We'll have to flow it eyptian style one time, but I do look forward to reading some of your flows. Thanks Again and Take All of my Brother & Sisters! Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    much love at ya Emissary keep da ink flowin
     
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    AAAaawwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
    This is so sweet!!!
    :luvv: :luvv: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    whew, i'm loving this! Pulled me right through to the end. Tight drop poet.
     
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