Khasm13 : making waves....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the moist ripples of your body
    causes a rapture
    that makes my salivating soul
    easy to capture
    glistening ebony dew droplets
    are enhanced by the essense of your stature
    with my throat dry
    i lust for your candy juice
    the love inside of me has produced a sweet tooth
    i wish to become totally emersed
    so i can gaze at your chocolate waves
    then ease in so slo so i can become totally submersed
    as your warm water washes me clean
    the tantalizing taste makes me a fiend
    while the sun sparkles off your liquid surface
    causing a mesmorizing gleam
    that i remember vividly in my daydreams
    your flowery fluid stabilizes me
    like afro sheen
    when we swirl and combine as a team
    similar to a coffy bean and fluid forming steam
    i want you
    i mean
    i need you
    i mean
    i love you
    and the waves we make unseen
    in the blue sea
    and all the way to the bottom green...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoooaaaa...:eeek: khas, you never cease to amaze me
     
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    much more then i expect
    as i swirl into a mode
    sweep into this flow
    that heat me so deeply

    was not ready
    for the verbs that spilled
    from this canvas
    that is indeed
    place a enchantment
    of a higher desire

    as i yes become heated more
    from this def flow
    and yes so much more

    i want to say more
    but i am just gonna
    feel your flow more
    gosh this so so nice:)
    Peace
    Bluewater:heart:
     
  4. Khasm13

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    see swtt...i am slowly learning
    with da help of my fam
    how to do da love jones...(thx rich and bishop)...lol

    my soul sista blue
    is anyone ever really ready for true love
    when it grabs you and holds you tight
    blinding you to the rest of the world
    if only for a moment in time?
    thank you for the sweet words :heart:
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now that feels like... mmmmmm

    I enjoy the variety of your gift

    nicely scribed :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmm...i feel like i'm floating myself, this was just sooo beautiful
    i mean i loved it
    i mean i got lost in :sand:
    This was just totally off the hook much love to you Khas
     
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    ......wow, would be an understatement...

    Whatever your "MUSE"...is...

    Please don't ever lose it...

    but somehow I perceive from your writing, you wouldn't...

    and to think...you don't even like "this kind of poetry"... :wink:

    Boy (said in my most endearing term)....you've really been wowing me lately.

    Whew....I've gotta find something to get me off this high you've put my mind on.

    I think I'm inspired to write... or something :bowdown:
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you took me in wanting more
    this was awwwwww
    lol i am speechless
    lovin ya flow......
    this was off the scales.....
     
  9. gempis

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    whoa Khas....if you been learnin from the rest of the fam, then you have learned well, brotha. This was off the chain. Lovin this side of you and lookin forward to seein it more.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this scribe couldn't help but make waves, this was so seductive...flow on.
     
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