Black Poetry : ~~Making Spiritual Love~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I spoke to him in whispers of
    silver thread....


    Last night I laid upon my bed, my voice
    raised in soundless adoration.


    I got up and began to dance.....

    slow, pure movements; every gesture
    a different wordless Thank you.

    I lay on the floor prostrate,
    and my soul pours forth....

    pours forth an endless and boundless sea of
    thank you's and sweet, sweet proclivities.

    YOU, are my life-long activity and it's
    because of you that I have my being, breath
    or see.

    I lay upon my bed, eyes closed.
    My body warmed by your presence and my
    soul responds.
    I speak in foreign tongues dripping with love and
    reverential respect.
    Behind closed eyes I feel you smile and my heart swells greatly.

    My mind rushes to comprehend the feather-light
    brushstrokes of fire and the onslaught of fevered warmth
    encasing me...
    but if fails to catch up or catch on.
    My spirit lies waiting for you....
    anticipating your entrance,
    your possession and next kiss.

    Lying in a room of Peace-dipped darkness and
    quiet. I create my own soul-stirring song and we
    groove, you and me; we move to the subtle beat with
    you in the lead.
    I slowly and willingly loose control.
    "Please take over and i'll follow YOUR lead!"
    Taken from one high to another, my heart is stroked
    casually and my breath catches as you
    speak and kiss me intimately....

    Tonite I surrender to you.....
    I surrender for a life-time of intimacy and
    gold-inlaid kisses built on a relationship of
    divine intensity and 1,000 hues of bliss.
    Tonite and forever I'm your's.

    Tonite I lay upon my bed,
    silently and relaxed.
    Peaceful and expectant with my
    eyes closed and my spirit staring above.
    Tonite I lie upon my bed as God enters and
    we spend a wonderful night engaged in
    sweet, aromatic spiritual love.


    ~Copyright 2004
    PropheticNsyght​
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this was nice. That's the stuff I want. That spiritual love.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jesus Loves You!
     
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    Accepting all that God has to offer, what a heavenly experience to behold. Wonderful.
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and Soul boo. Thank you so much!!! Blessings
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I'm in love with him!!!!!!!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it is watz. Thank you for your love ma.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I respect this piece. Nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice the love of thy son of god
     
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    Poet...I've always said it...
    and I will continue to proclaim it...
    You are a Poetic Prodigy...
    I've never seen spiritual poetry
    written the way you write it...
    you have a gift that flows on levels
    that many of us aspire to reach...

    ...I am without words...without words
    mmm...mmm...mmm

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
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    Sage​
     
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