Black Poetry : Making Sex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Euphoria, Mar 3, 2003.

  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She watches him as he exists the heat of the shower,
    His shoulders broad and strong, glisten with moisture,
    A white towel around his hard, chocolate waist,
    He notices her laying, head on her hand,
    Without a smile he crosses the room and lays his toned self-
    Down next to her perfectly naked form,
    Removing his towel, he kisses her deeply before -
    Making his form of love, to her,
    Once the rush is over, he stands and gathers his towel,
    And she watches as he strolls out to the balcony,
    Without muttering an emotion.

    16/12/02

    *Emma*
     
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    Whew! This was like a good soap! Nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff ...like watching a soap
    and no emotion or smiles wow!!!
     
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    can you say

    somebody got tranquilized with the tranquilizer :lol:

    tight flow Euphoria tight flow :toast:

    peace

    pd

    :heart:
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love everyone. It's much appreciated.

    A soap huh? well I never thought of it that way :) hmmmm.....

    *Emma*
     
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    he showered
    he came
    he went
    hmmm
    yeah...i'd call that sex.:)

    let the river flow
     
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    WHEW CHILE, IT'S GETTING HOTT IN HERE :hot: !
    i needs me a cold shower!!!!

    nice flow ;)
     
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    emma.


    you are making me remember one of the
    many things i love about poetry & that is
    that it is art... therefore open for many
    varied interpretations...

    you said a WHOLE lot without a whole
    lot of lines... it's up to the reader what
    they take with them. :wink: great job!!
    (as usual) keep flowin' & growin'...

    alwayspeace&Love,
    elayne.
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew! what great visions you have painted with your words, this is very nice


    am
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emma~

    Remember me? lol

    I am still astounded by your talent!!! Seriously loving what you've displayed here...

    Reas
     
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