Black Poetry : Making Lust (Rough Draft)

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  1. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most women
    May be afraid to talk like this
    But your body, I just cant resist
    staring at you with bedroom eyes
    imagining your hands rubbing my thighs
    my body temperature rises, a fahrenheit or two
    thinking about the damage we're about to do
    come here and let me undress you
    caress you
    feel every essence of you
    surround you
    in my sea of uncontrollable waves
    you have me in a daze
    didnt know lust existed this many ways
    (EXHALING)
    Round Two
    we're still not through
    bed rocking
    leggs locking
    eyes *glistening*
    are the neighbors listening?
    bodies smacking
    a lil lip action
    from the countertops to the floor
    your screams are louder than before
    from the sofa to the stairway
    Mmm....Mmm....Mmm is all I can say
    with that last thrust
    I knew you were about to bust
    then slowly we move as one
    and up comes the sun
    our lustful acts is done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed love dis lustful ride .....whewwwwww!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice write....
     
  4. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys for taking the time to read my work...I am also big fans of both of you. Keep up the fabolous work!!!
     
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    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Profound lust

    Hiclass_female, Well what a clear sexy picture of blissful fun, I see you have the words of vision creating a hot item, so please continue with your creative flow.
     
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    a rough draft huh :)
    nice drop sis
    Peace
     
  7. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you.....just trying something different from my other work. Glad ya'll are feeling it.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew!!!

    Somebody turn the fan on & gimme some icewater, cuz it's HOT in herre.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, I'm exhausted just reading this, never mind if I was, um...well, anyway, did I say this was hot? Nicely done.
     
  10. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL Thank you, ya'll are too sweet!
     
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