Black Poetry : Making love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissHoney, Apr 13, 2006.

  1. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    Making love is an art,true love is expressed
    theres a deeper meaning to it, not just sex
    while your making love,your mate treats you with care
    slowly caresses your body,removing underwear
    your bodies shown to each other,privacy exposed
    dont have to rush, you can do it slow
    He uses his tounge to every inch of your body
    feelings running wild ,making your head cloudy
    your nipples hard, your ***** wet
    together ta made fire ,being lit out from ya sweat
    You slowly open up, as your man pushes in
    the art of making love,this is not a sin
    your moaning so loud, cause you feel it in your back
    the expressions on your face , when ya privacys clashed
    tonight your not bending over, not getting to your knees
    cause this is exactly, how true love feels
    let it out, you dont have to bite your lip
    He wanna hear the sound, his **** make you pitch
    you dont have to be shy, because ya have trust
    because ya true to eah other, its not just lets *****
    together ya made beauty, a gift from God above
    together ya had the expirence of making love

    by:MissHoney
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  2. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    n can giv a reply n my guest book. thank u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love and respect
    welcome within from above bless this scribe some love

    well felt , the mist of love the beauty of it and it's feelings
    again welcome within MissHoney
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OWEEEE DAT WAS HOTT MY SISTAH
    A LOT OF STEAM RISEING...LOL
    AND I WAS FEELIN YO POEM BECUZ U SHUDNT HIDE
    THE FEELIN OF WUT TRUE LUV DOES 2 U
    SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP
    DIS YO SISTAH G.A JUS SHOWIN SUM LUV




    ****BLACKLUV AND BP****
     
  5. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let's Fire Dr. Phil cause you sho nuff can teach us how to love sista. I'm sweatin this piece literally. Keep up the fire!
     
  6. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for that drop, alot of people don't now what making love is, but you hit it right on the head!
     
  7. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for showing some luv and your definition of love. can't wait to read more
     
  8. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Sister that was real deep
    Sexually not bound by any rules on this
    That was hot for sure real deep
    Much Love Poet
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WWWHHHHHOOOOOOAAAAAAA!!!!!!

    Okay, that's the way you
    introduce yrself to the forum!!!
    I loved it!!!
     
  10. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    lol! u told Dr.Phil 2 move over.
    Thanks ya, n theres more where that came from
     
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