Black Poetry : Making Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Nov 19, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We made love last night
    and my skin still burns today
    from the mental reminder of your gentle fingertips
    tracing patterns of love down to my hips
    lifting me like a bowl to your lips
    satisfying both your hunger and my desire
    taking me to places - never been higher
    moving your mouth from cavern to thighs
    it's finally now when I open my eyes
    and suddenly you make me realize
    that this whole time you were making love to me
    it was the look in your eyes gazing into mine
    and the way that our bodies intertwined
    rocking to a rhythm so intimate,
    so slow and hard. . .i hate to admit it
    but i have never felt like i was even in the same room
    let only my mind, body and soul so fully consumed
    and this thought sent me into sensory overload
    a ball of fire traveled from toes to head as i started to explode
    but it didn't end there
    you caught me unprepared
    the rest of the night continued the same
    and over and over again i came and i came
    but, the best part, something that has never happened to me before
    at the first crack of light you didn't head for the door
    you stayed all day talking and caressing
    baby, I just want you to know this love is a blessing.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like the way this ran down the page...
    so well written..
    flow on Poet of the week...
    sister this was like wow...:angel1:
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:

    thanks mama, didn't know I could write like that
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet music to my ear
    love making is wooooweeeee!
    u go gurl !!!
     
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    [email protected] gurl that love truly is a blessing...love that gives and asks nothing in return...just beautiful...I loved this piece/peace because it speaks to the difference between having "sex" & making "love"
     
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    whoooooooooa...

    lifting me like a bowl to your lips...

    Girl, this line alone...conjured memories in me
    that made me wanna repent....WHOA :jawdrop:
    but why repent for something so beautiful
    something that the very creator...made himself...


    Go on with ya "Bad Self"....
    this piece made my thoughts...
    it's own...
     
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    this is such a tyte flow....very hot...tokk me into places where "do not cross" is written in my mind:lol: :hot::hot::jawdrop:....this had got to be one of your hottest pieces yet
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey - wow, and the love keeps flowing here, i've been worried a little ebcause of the tone of the page lately. nice to know who you can count on for always taking time to show respect.

    the more I write the more it seems my heart heals and allows the goodness to pur forth.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed flow on and love roams
    ya heart will heal we feel ya .....
     
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    Wow. You turned the temperature up on this one. I'm not free in writing about certain emotions yet, but in time maybe. Props 2 u.
     
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