Black Poetry : Making love to Rain Drops

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  1. Puerto_Rocco

    Puerto_Rocco Member MEMBER

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    Making love to Rain Drops


    How blessed I feel licking... your thoughts into peaks.
    How intrigued you made me feel by thinking... your Guards to sleep.

    I snuck pass your fortress security, unmasked the plot that you were giving me.
    Crept past and coming close to delivery, are you asking me for my energy.

    Can I embed my orgasmic but organic pressure to tremble your epicenter.
    Can I thrust my sword into flesh, til the death of you will be remembered.

    You shadowed your emotions for so much time the hard rock now makes sand.
    You question why I am attracted to you for such a mind, but just understand.

    I have, all my life searched for you, sweat me pain with two brown skins in unison.
    I have, learned my lesson, just look into my eyes and listen how I admire you again.

    Grab you from behind, kiss your neck and bite you, nibble you and get physical with..
    Trap both hands into bondage above your head, your bed and devour heaven sent..

    You like how I tongue maraud your nipples? ayyy! absorb this dont run astray.
    You might just pour your tears among emotions on me, paused animation is now on play.

    We know this formula, bake long term, boiled hard core and slighty simmered.
    We are sincere not to hide it, gentle but always firm, you want more?but now you are centered

    By antonio arriagada aka Puerto_Rocco
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vey lucky queen!
     
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    that was beautiful antonio.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Puerto_Rocco

    Put in on her and lay it down
    And show her...dog gone it...who wears the crown :D

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    Aye, muy bueno papi! This poem was a REAL PLEASURE to read, it was sensual and rhythmic. Excellente!
     
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    man I can't help but admit that I was turned on by your piece.
    Spleshly loving the lines"I have in all my life searched for you, sweat me pain two brown skins in unison".. You straight slayed me wit that one.

    BLess U
     
  7. Puerto_Rocco

    Puerto_Rocco Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much. I feel blessed to be acknowledge so.
     
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    very smooth and heart felt
    u laid down da P..........
    show ya love in motion Tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaaay Rocco :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Sorry for taking so long to get over here to show you the kind of love this beautiful poetry deserves! I think the reason it took me so long to get over here and post is because after hearing you read this same peace live ... www.************ ... whewwwww ... oohhh my gosh ... with that beautiful accent and these words and the room was black ... and everything began to spinnnn and well ... whewwwwww ... i'm just regaining full consciousness ... :wink: ... would you mind reading it again please??!!! :)

    Truly, so beautiful meeting you, hearing you, making a new friend.

    Listening to you play some Salsa right now on the mic!

    You're the Best! Thanks for all the Love ... and you already know you're at home!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Digging this ever so softly...this was beautiful..
     
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