Black Poetry : Making History

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  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    We've been looking for a movement,
    the dynamic black call...
    the signal designating America's final fall.
    We've been searching for a leader,
    the so called black messiah....
    someone of strength and conviction,
    instead of another black pariah.

    Our eyes have been closed,
    to histories written check...
    we done pin pointed the cause,
    as we suffer through the effect...
    But the picture's much bigger.
    and now it's time to see...
    what we've been searching for,
    is now found in you and me....

    Piece by piece we all play our part,
    like a jigsaw puzzle looking shaky at the start.
    So don't panic or listen for last calls.
    cause like dominoes standing up each one has got to fall.
    We've been knocking them down,
    and now it's plain to see...
    that instead of just writing,
    we're making history!
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    ^^ much respect Brother Keita..

    this is on point!
     
  3. LovesDestiny

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    We ARE making history! Each of us holds an important and vital piece to that jigsaw puzzle....

    On point!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Each of us are an important part of the puzzle, whether we realize it, or not. Potent words poet.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Brother Keita
    Yes indeed.
    The wheel have never stop turning.
    And we are now the witness
    to history.

    Peace~N~Love
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are making history!, sho nuff mayne!
    Thanks, this read was pleasant.
    DS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop and deep man u spin a master piece
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so sure you're right brother,

    You are history in the making.

    ENCORE... Write as Rain.
     
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