Black Poetry : Making Changes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 19, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    People keeping us down.
    I feel the day when freedom comes.
    Stop bussing us, cussing us, fussing and fighting.
    Taking care of business it be righting us.
    Chilling with my friends.
    We all have ends.
    Enough to bend the will of the wind.
    Folks coming scandalous.
    Trying to handle us.
    But we won't tolerate the hate no more.
    Wages of those struggling making them juggling the need. :teach:

    Voted lately? That might make a way to be.
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so tru, so tru. put in a form that just hits you. Like it or not. Nice flow. :)
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE, this piece is the bomb. You came with it, and you laid it down tight. Makes me want more, brothah.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with ya

    nice flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    making change was off da hook
    brutha u mastered this to perfection
     
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    for real my brother the day indeed is coming..nice drop
    Peace
     
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