Black Poetry : .....???? makes the world go round?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Apr 21, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Day In The Life....

    clock clicks 6:15
    BEEEEEP BEEEEEP BEEEEEP BEEEEEP
    slap snooze button
    five minutes later the TV and radio blast
    ****...forgot to accidentally turn that back up off last night again!!
    Lay on back and stare at ceiling while eyes fight to focus,
    mumbeling my mantra:
    I hate my life....I hate my job....
    mind on CD random while I wash and get dressed...
    Are these too wrinkled? Yes, they are...Oh well...they will flatten out in the car!
    driving in my crappy car...traffic bumper to bumber...
    Why I always got to get stuck behind slow *** old people?
    pass them on the illeagal side and give my
    Why the hell are you driving so slow, you idiot?! glare
    now I'm stuck behind a school bus full of frolicing brats...
    face screwed up tight while I wish I could have had an extra hour of sleep
    and mumble my mantra:
    I hate my life....I hate my stupid job...
    finally step into the office
    folks lounging and eating doughnuts and McDonald's
    laughing and chatting before the clock strikes nine...
    why is that cat always glaring at me? he better go somewhere with that...
    man....why is that girl next to me always so fricking loud?!?!?
    SHUT UP ALREADY!! I DON'T CARE ABOUT WHAT YOUR MAN DID LAST NIGHT!!
    I hate my life.....I hate this God foresaken job.....
    *************Nine O'Clock***************
    voices everywhere....
    phones ringing off the hook
    people rushing around-shuffling past my tiny hole in the world
    yes ma'am we can do that for you...
    no sir....we don't have that available....
    paperwork? you gave it to me when?
    feinding for a smoke break....no **** cigarettes....!
    I....HATE.....THIS.....JOB......
    wanda did you finish that report?
    cindy....what did you do with that fax?
    why has john been on the phone for ten minutes?
    work through lunch...?
    Man....you must be trippin!
    I sure can sir....that won't be a problem.....
    what time were you due to come in?
    I don't care about your car problems or your dog being sick!
    I....HATE....MY.......LIFE......
    what? what was I supposed to be doing....?
    man....gotta finish this report before the meeting!
    what do you mean the time was pushed up?!?!
    you need me to cover for the floor supervisor again?!?
    mu*%^&^%& F(&*%%$$(* G)()&*%&%&*$#^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    no problem sir....of course I can....
    head frickin' ExPlOdInG....
    heart imploding....
    chest expanding....
    Can't I just have some peace?
    I hate this flippin' job!
    I can't stand these stupid people! Can't anyone do ANYTHING on their own?!?
    I should f*^%*&# quit this piece of s*@%!!
    F*^% all yall!!
    I HATE THIS **** JOB!!!
    I HATE MY LIFE!!!
    WHY THE HELL AM I HERE?!?!?

    huh? my check?! today is thursday?
    systems calming down as I open it....
    AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........
    Now that's what I'm talking bout!
    Yes....
    I love my job.......
    I love my life!!



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  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Heard That!!!!!!!!

    Tight piece SG!!!!

    We all need a lil more of somethin' ta help us make it through the slave grind fa sho!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya gurl....

    loud and CRYSTAL!!
    Nice piece!!
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is definitely funny how money takes the edge off of stress, but, what if you have a gazillion bills? I...hate...my...life...etc. This piece is too real can I say been there done that doing that and all that. Tight,Tight, Tight!!!

    one love,blak
     
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    I HEARD THAT!

    GURL,THAT THINGS WE DO FOR MONEY,HA HA HA HA,You go gurl, Gurl,you've got me cracking up,ain't this something we all go through! till we open that check "now that's better" lol. Girl,you something else. Feeling this ha ha ha ha. You be stressin for days and remember that's why I have this job lol. Go on ahead wit yo bad self. Keep reppin.
    Desert Storm
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I knew folks could relate to this....

    i am telling u.....
    i was strssed the hell out at my job when i spit this one out.....


    and i know so many can relate....especially us customer servers....

    thanks for the love yall ;)
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, this is just about ryght!!! i had a ruff week myself and i don't hate my job, but those d*** people...get on my d*** nerves, i'm feelin' this piece to the utmost. but, i saw that check today and everythang is alryyyght, until somebody else get on my last danglin' nerve (lol).
     
  8. visualx

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    this is why i'll surf for 20 minutes to find some star goddess stuff.
     
  9. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!!!

    visual x?!?!!?!

    i got your message on the other side of hyperspace....

    im working on a come back just for you suga!!

    thanks for taggin me up!

    *floating between existance*:kiss:
     
  10. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had to laugh at the end of this one. Great piece...the things we do for money. Hehehehehe.
     
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