Black Poetry : Make Up Your Mind

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  1. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    MAKE UP YOUR MIND

    If I can’t be your lover
    Why should I be your friend
    You got me in a situation
    One way it’s got to end
    An opportunity is knocking at your door
    So what in the world are you waiting for
    Do you think someone better will come along
    I hate to tell you this darling
    You could never be more wrong
    In me
    You will not only find your best friend
    But
    You will have a lasting love until the very end
    Why not open your heart and let me on in.
    I don’t often get a feeling like this
    Where I find myself
    Longing to be held, longing to be kissed
    No one else would treat you like me
    For I’d treat you better than a king
    I would never be a disgrace
    I’ll show you respect and
    Give you all the honor that you are due
    If only you accept this love I have for you
    So
    Why do you hesitate to make up your mind
    There are other men who is waiting in line
    They recognize the good woman
    You are failing to see
    So
    The choice is yours
    Is it going to be me.
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see the line being drawn in the sand...sometimes it's necessary.
    Felt u on this.
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this too:) SUMtime we gonna make that extra push when he hisself ain't gonna do it for fear of gettin ."uncomforable" when really.........we were the best things going for them :) Good flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes this one i felt within
    keep scribing
     
  5. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks all, ya really know how to boost my ego ( big cheesy grin)
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' this flow!
    nothing wrong with being sure of self!
    Peace and love!
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u go head on sistah .....he'd be a fool to choose anything(or anyone) else :toast:
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every womens dreams I am feeling this.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow!
     
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