Black Poetry : ...Make Me Scream Pt. II... (Tantalizin’ Tongue)

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Startin’ from my cheeks
    Slowly driftin down
    Hands massage my cheeks
    Lips on mine surround
    Hands are on my back
    Circling as they go
    Fingers grip my back
    Never to let me go
    Travel down my neck
    Please me like you should
    Hit spots on my neck
    Only like you could
    Make me scream your name
    As loudly as I can
    Make me moan good thangs
    Over and over again
    Now you got me shook
    Massaging my chest
    And the way you look
    Makes me want no rest
    Tantalizin' tongue
    Does my body good
    Feeds me in a way
    That it knows it should
    Now butterfly kisses
    Run down my stomach
    Makin’ me scream wishes
    Makin’ you haunt it
    Next you’ve reached a place
    That only you know
    My hips you embrace
    So I won’t let go
    And you make me scream
    Your tantalizin' tongue
    You go past my dreams
    Rubbin’ and licks of the tongue
    You make me shout your name
    Never thought I would come
    Shaking boldly in this way
    Lovin’ your tantalizin' tongue…
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl girl girl....you really ripped it! this is just too dayum hot! much love to you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like this....tight flow
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks truelove and mzblk:)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttt..................
    Lovely G, you shut it DOWN!:jawdrop:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u want da twist
    of the tongue bliss
    i am the master
    in da feast
    now u are da treat
    dippin low
    toes curl
    as i rock ya world
    name called x 3
    fulfill ever so deep
    handz caressin
    every curve
    i see da bite of ya lip
    every time i dip
    ya moans become
    screams ya
    whisper become holla's
    da bliss of compassion
    in sweet affection
    got u shook
    from da love u just took
    kissin u
    reachin
    spots
    the one dat have u hot
    all u can do is scream
    right before u ..........
    steamy
    sweet
    sticky
    dew
    da twisted tongue
    will make u ...
    have u beckon fo mo
    when i put on da freak show
    make ya body yearn
    da mad heat u burn
    from da blissful kiss
    of the royal $$RICHNE$$

    can u handle dis miss.....
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol :laugh: thanks swtt
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderin' if i can handle you?
    i'll have you feenin' me when i get through
    twistin' my tongue in ya mouth
    grippin' and lovin' you in and out
    you say your the master?
    well show me how you are master
    if can make me moan faster
    maybe you are the master
    so what are you gonna do to me
    to make me unbelievably
    feel good, past all the sexual
    show me master, ya intellectual
    as you taste on my body
    pleasurin' my entire body
    considerin' me a treat
    when actually i'm your defeat
    sure you can go down
    oh so low down
    and make my toes curl
    makin' my body unfurl
    can you really rock my world
    pleasure me, tease me, in your world
    fillin' me with your richness X 3
    goin' past your sexual capability
    my curves in ya caressing hands
    on the wall, bed, against the nightstand
    my grips on ya skin is not enough
    i try to bite my lip, in ya every touch
    i don't wanna scream but they come
    in sync with me as i come and come
    screamin' out ya $$richness$$ all night
    holdin' to ya body for dear life
    a gentle kiss you give me baby
    full of compassion in it baby
    you say your the master of the tongue
    well you mastered me with ya tongue
    in a sweet affectionate special way
    i can handle you $$rich$$ anyday...
    the question for you my dear sweetie
    is do you THINK you can handle me??:D
     
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    Girl you are a master at capturing the

    "HOTNESS"......and trapping in a flow...

    whew....
     
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    whoa, whoa, whoa!!!!!!!!!!! lawd have mercy!!!

    This is so :hot: :hot:

    and I'm diggin it, Lovely, cause the tantalizin tongue is somethin all women can agree on, no matter what their persuasion. Well done, sister girl.
     
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