Black Poetry : Make Me HOT

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  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so **** cold
    cold to the bone
    but you know how
    to make me hot

    I'm so **** blue
    I'm not feeling you
    but you know how
    to make me hot

    My heart is empty
    my soul is craving
    why do you know how
    to make me hot

    I lay in bed wishing
    praying and wishing
    you were here now
    to make me hot

    My love is torn
    dreams seem to mourn
    do you remember how
    you make me hot

    I'm wet with desire
    hunger set on fire
    please hit my spot
    to make me hot

    Only you know how...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!

    what i bring is extreme
    take u pass hot
    and make u scream
    da love bite
    in a 12 play
    of a erotic crave
    set ya desires on fire
    take ya mental
    up in flyte
    set off a blazzin night
    rock u slow in caress
    roll u to gentleness
    so u feel da depth
    of a heart and master
    the bliss from start
    wrap u in da comfort zone
    as my handz roam
    sweep ya dreams
    into a reality of a love's
    greatest rapture
    open ya mind
    as i seep in
    and fulfill a destiny
    compassionately
    da warmth of heat will
    set of a thrill never
    again will u feel a chill
    in da extreme bliss
    of da magical twist
    from above .........

    becareful of a wish
    u might become a dish
    of twisted extremeness
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, I guess sometimes, you get your wish...lol. This was hot.
     
  4. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, just blow me away.....that was nice!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u most welcome
    your skillz is tyte as well
    flow on