Black Poetry : make me believe it...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 22, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    {... you know the kinda brotha that is so completely smooth
    you just wanna hear how he's gonna fix his lips
    to tell that bold face lie this time}

    ...actually get all excited
    like it's a privilege
    to be had...

    cuz the funky force of his
    faux flow
    is so GOT****
    baddddddd


    and
    he's such a master with
    the silky tongue twist
    making everything he
    says so hard to resist

    you can lay a trap
    all you want
    but he be
    so sly slick wicked
    you'll be the one getting caught

    all up in his rhetoric
    dumbfounded by his diction
    knowing the tale he's spinning
    is pure d-fiction

    so yeah, i'm waiting
    to hear the singular melodic vibe
    of one of the greatest linguistic
    maneuverers alive

    tell me
    something different
    from what i already know
    and make me believe
    it, just cuz he said so...


    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "so yeah, i'm waiting
    to hear the singular melodic vibe
    of one of the greatest linguistic
    maneuverers alive"

    this is an awesome poem........i love your work!

    and those are the kind of men women fall for.............
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ooouuuu Alyce ... dontcha just luv to be done this way!!!

    Excuse Me ... I'll take 2 of those Please

    They cost how much? ... that's fine ... I'll Pay ...
    :)

    Luv'n Yo' Flow Gurl ... Danngggg

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooh, thank you so much for your kind words, lonelypoet!!! and yes... ladies fall cuz they wanna.... :)

    Destee.... see... you know :wink:


    :heart:

    alyce
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Nice read Queen!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    MERCY! And then there's the one who's so smooth, he don't even HAVE to lie. He just stays "nonspecific" with the details and u don't mind one bit. Such a relationship has its limitations, but Ohhh LORD those benefits! See it clearly for what it is and what it is not, and enjoy the ride. I mean, you don't expect a roller coaster to really TAKE you anywhere do ya? LOL
    :rolling:

    Nice piece alyce!!!
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U No Dats Wright

    This was too good--I seen it happen--set and watched them believe a bold faced lie--like it wss the truth--you captured some reality here--might have even done some of this myself--naw!--that was somebody else--Ra

    :)
     
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    ahh...beware the wizard of words laying scenic scapes so real it feels as if you've never heard of them before...

    there are some sistas who also have dem skillz...lol

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    GO head on Ms A !!!!!!!!

    FLow that flow you flow OH so well You know we have all met those smooth operators that can make us ANtiCiPAtE their next line !
    You got this one ! :toast:
     
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    Alyce, I've fallen for waaayyy too many smooth talking, smooth walking sexy bruthas, but I know I gotta stop, it's not healthy. Anyways girl, I love you piece. Keep up your awesome vibe.
    *Emma*
     
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