Black Poetry : make a memory

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Jun 17, 2002.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do me a favor
    trace my jawline with your finger
    and around my lips let it linger
    so i can have a sample of
    how sweet you are

    let me inhale your essence
    then in my mind try to recreate the fragrance
    when you're not around for stimulation
    and i must rely on mental masturbation
    at least i'll have something in my mind
    so you can take credit
    when
    i
    reach....

    i want to know every part of you
    and everything that you do
    so when you're not here
    and i can't hold you near
    i still have a part of you with me

    i want an imprint of you in my soul
    i want my aura to be contaminated with yours
    i want to inhale your confusion and exhale understanding
    i want you to experience the closest thing to perfection possible
    i want that because
    i know i was created for you
    i want u and me to be
    us
    and i want us just to
    be

    diva08 (c) 2002
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    diva!!!!!

    "so i can have a sample of
    how sweet you are "


    just one of the many lines that are on point. Love the flow.




    One
     
  3. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww

    thanks poet

    missed u

    d
     
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    it is so good

    to read your words again....

    I love this "peace" because it speaks to me of what is an important reason we're all here. In the end, we'll have our memories of those who touched us; and we'll be part of the memories of those we've touched. Forever. (I dug your very last line immensely!)

    don't be a stranger! :heart:

    alyce
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mz Diva, so good to read you again.
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply

    inspiring
    Very nice read
    Natasha
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    diva, you still know how to paint a picture..This is a tight flow here...
     
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    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    thanks sooooo much y'all. love ya to death!

    d
     
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    i dig it all :toast:
     
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    Diva...
    a simply beautiful piece...
    thank u 4 sharing.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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