Spoken Word : Mainstream-materialism;

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  1. Corvo

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    Mainstream-materialism;
    consume all you can today, save nothing for a rainy day.
    What you need, is get straight A’s, follow the rules and graduate.

    Don’t listen to the hollers, ..Nor the pain,
    just work hard all day.

    One day you’ll be at the top, they say.
    If you’re lucky, stay healthy and strong,
    you’ll get your due, even if you’re wrong.
    For if you’ll have’ta wait, till your dyeing day.

    God will reward you, for all you’ve done.
    You’ll at lease rest, in a pile of dung.
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I feel ya!


    GOD is a servant
    serving her god
    Create your GOD

    And

    She Will serve up whatever is in your pot
    The pot here means your heart
    You see my god desired to be the number 1 emm cee
    And my my my look at his reality
    You destroy your goddess
    Once she makes your wish your command
    Then of course you get damned
    To serve their "god"
    It's not hard to know GOD
    nor her ways
    Just
    Live not die for better days
     
  3. Corvo

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    Thanks Miss Lady, That was good.

    The god I was reffering to is the old male god of the wasp's.

    Not the creator I'm connected to. May she always look over me!
     
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    I know ....

    but why re-create gods of ole if gods are co-creators

    it's time for in with the new and out with the old

    you live in her and with her conceptually

    why should she look over you when u can walk with her???

    just hypotheticals-

    peace
    peace

    Br. Corvo
     
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    thats powerful.. a complete criticism of the entire modern world in 8 lines..
    thats power. it's amazing what we can do with sarcasm and subversion and
    comedy..
     
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    Thank You brother, That is way cool, coming from you.

    AXE!
     
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    this was great , well done
     
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