Khasm13 : maiden voyage...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    on waves of serious seas my hull bashes white foam repeatedly
    uncharted waters are seemingly decieving to me...seasonally
    i venture for an adventure till the time of missing teeth and dentures
    with ears alert like a doberman pinchers...experience expands my sensors
    so that jagged coral reefs underneath mans grief does not wither my sails like a dying leaf
    my belief is that God blows you with a wind that he designed for you to be in
    not all boats are crafted to win races and sometimes losing races contorts faces
    not all of us will sail to an island oasis...the strife in the world filled the cases for my basis
    the devil chases the weak out of the fleet
    cause stormy days and nights can beat a sail sheet to admit defeat
    my boat is small and meek...and on my maiden voyage i have felt supreme heat
    the path to my current location has not been neat
    filled with hurricanes that tried to bend my frame and
    water sprites that tried to sink my ship at night
    Lord knows that i've constantly had a fight
    but as long as i make it to my final destination
    everything is gonna be aiight....
     
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    Yet it's alright,
    Your light's
    Shining ((BRIGHT))
    You'll see... yeah!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing can stop u, sail str8 ahead
    surely it's da Lord's will flow on bruh !
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    ALRIGHT Khasm! I loved this!

    It is so true that all of us have our on path.
    all of us arent meant to sail to
    that Island oasis. But we keep
    pushing onward in hopes that
    we make it to our final destination!

    Tyte Drop!!!!!!!
    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok now...loiving ya style!!!
    we all have that path
    and we will make it some day...
    likes this right here... :wink:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

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    That was absolutely beautiful. I was inside of this piece as I read it. Absolutely beautiful.
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    very together brother khasm
    and if "your boat is small and meek"
    trust me it is heavy laden with the gold
    the creativity , the love that we all seek...
    thanks....for it...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A vessel flowing with a rustic vision and determination to make it to shore. Loved the creativity here.
     
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