Black Poetry : Mahogany Soul

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  1. MiztikalDreams

    MiztikalDreams Member MEMBER

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    Mahogany Soul

    I will not be misjudged by another man's misconceptions of my mind's intentions
    Abused mentally as he construes my mahogany temple.
    Pervertedly contemplating of my secretive treasure without my approval.
    Defiling me as some average prostitute on the street because of the way I dress.
    My style is a statement,
    an expression of my soul
    My way of rebellion from the world's works and systematic control
    I do as I please with consent from my mind,
    my emotions
    Conception of my soul seeps throught my skin and shines brightly throught my pores
    Showing my development of things unseen to the naked eye.
    My personality is not made for the man of this world but yet for the one above that
    The one who respects the progression of time and the aging of the world.
    The man that understands the meaning of mahogany soul,
    the soul of me,
    the soul that sets me free
    the soul that controls my individuality
    So to the average joe blow with no dreams and no goals...
    discontinue to indulge yourself with ideas of my secrets that this skin holds
    Because unless you are this man...
    You will never understand

    My

    Mahogany

    Soul

    Ya'll I'm new so don't dawg me out too bad!!!!!!!! :glasses:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within u kin now

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome wit love & grace happy to feel ya
    flow in dis place it's tyte and full of delight
    welcome from above sistah Queen
    do join us in chat too open mic / poetry at
    www.destee.com/chat look to read more of u
    welcome :coffee: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave: and welcome
    this is a lovely flow
    wonderful drop
    very deep..thank you for sharing
    please do flow more
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome and glad to have you aboard...
    This was a wonderful piece...like where you took it. Thanks for sparing your pen with us.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dawg you out...Never that... :wave:
    Welcome to Destee.com
    where we are a family and all about love and support
    I like this flow because it talks about the importance
    of being "who you are"..., self discovery...
    celebrating your "Unique Self"...

    I loved it...and the beauty that Mahogany Soul... :toast:
     
  6. MiztikalDreams

    MiztikalDreams Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Ya'll. I'm just a newcomer to tha came but I'm startin to get tha hang of it. I actually like this spot...It gives me a chance to express the person that I really am and not conform to the actions of the world. I think I've found my new spot on the net!!!!!!!!
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome, Miz

    The flow was tight. The people here are good, don't be scared. :fairy:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked the way you flowed with this, so proud of the uniqueness of self, yes. Welcome and please continue to flow.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it possible for me to loose myself in a Mahogany Soul? This was beautiful to the fullest and once again welcome to Destee.com Ma. Be blessed. :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :coffee: :coffee: :coffee: :coffee: :coffee: :coffee: :coffee: :nuts: :nuts: :nuts: :nuts: :nuts: :nuts:
     
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