Black Haiku : Mahler's (unwritten) Symphony

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She became my own,
    "Das Lied Von Der Erde" piece
    Her earthiness merges

    We sang in concert
    Abandoning the music
    Solo voices raised.

    My rich contralto,
    swims in her high soprano
    and now we both glow

    With the beauty of
    The "Song of the Earth," reborn.
    Our song is forever
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    every sweet moment
    form thy earth to heart within
    dis was awesome tyte
     
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    "resurrection" bursts
    symphonic two meld as one
    earthen song brings love
     
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    Earthen song brings love.
    I feel myself falling fast
    No one understands.

    The sheet music burns,
    Our infinite increase;
    with the rise of music,
    we face off with love.

    Uncontrollable,
    moving and harmonies rise;
    Her voice sings thru me...
    Pierces me deeply...

    For eternity we sing.
    Earth song keeps me alive.
     
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    the core of lovin
    she is da flower of thee
    da warm feeling runs
     
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    My love runs very deeply
    from the core of my inner soul
    my flower blooms of beauty​
     
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    mahler's blood unpure
    yet his music sterilized
    filled with harmony

    sentimental sounds
    symphonically so profound
    universal love

    as he cries in pain
    earthen love songs soothe the ache
    keeping "we" alive
     
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    Keeping "we" alive
    feverish in my blood line
    undue and profound

    fingertips and keys
    Can you take me higher please?
    Let's scrape the dark sky

    Torrential release
    Her rain on my raw body
    touch me with your earth​
     
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    touch me with your earth
    a myriad of colors
    do you feel the sound?

    chordal browns and blues
    sweet motifs of pastel hues
    mahlers song goes round