Black Poetry : Magnetic Lover

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    [COLOR=purple[CENTER]]:luvv: [/COLOR][/CENTER]
    electrical charge pulls closer by dadepth & essence
    of ya heart like a magnetic lover
    your womanly soul drift into myreasons of mental
    as it cascade my thoughts, feeling the charge
    of ya heart beat rapidly my body go into a
    freeze a zone where lovers go and lone to
    be as it tap at my affection wit humble
    compassion & desires

    I lone to hold u and i'm not ova seeing
    u but inside my deepest slumber u r closer
    I think of all da tyme love tender and so fine
    I hold u in thoughts, I see u in my vision
    it's a magnetic bliss coz i am thee lover
    i love how u talk the way u walk
    how u compose ur my rare rose
    so unique and divine soft & meek

    sweet and warm like a suga cane
    the sur charge is intoxicating
    if u just open and understand my luv
    i'm da magnetic electrical lover
    come to me my beloveth i await you
    ya heart ,body N' soul upon ya spirit
    as we enterwined dine under candle
    light and feast on the harvest of love

    Let me tenderlize da moment and sealed
    wit my magical kiss to make u wet
    have u break out in cold sweat & chills
    while my love roam into da depth of
    ya deep thriller in da garden of love
    as we touch tropical rain forest of bliss
    ur become my tongue licking goodie
    :lips: :lips: :luvv: :lips: :lips:
    come 2 ur Magnetic
    L*O*V*E*R
    M...A...N
    Da $R
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice

    Very Nice $$RICH$$.

    I feel the strong magnectic field of attraction your working here. She couldn't resist the pull. Real sparks..

    C = you/her If you work out the math it is a ( Romance equation. )
    ========
    C = Electrical Charge
    You = $$RICH$$
    her = The Lady
     
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    affection wit humble
    compassion & desires
    i lone to hold u
    and i'm not ova seeing
    u but inside my deepest
    slumber u r closer
    i think of all da tyme
    love tender and so fine
    i hold u in thoughts
    i see u in my vision


    this sticks out...
    very well said !!
    within your heart
    the one you love you hold closer
    then she thinks...and she knows

    like the coming of the sun
    and the raising of the moon
    within her slumber your right by her side
    upon the waves of a magnetic pull
    she is yours in thoughts and visions
    as she comes...heart
    body mind soul and spirit
    in da garden of love
    within the paradise
    of you and her.....:heart:


    wonderful write you had me feeling it!!!!
    sometimes you just grasp my mental
    and take me away....

    loving the flow

    signed your
    #1 fan with a
    :kiss:
    Angel
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is nothing in this world...
    like a magnetic force!

    Nice work!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The magnetic force
    draws her in
    closer and closer
    recharging again
    A force beyond anything
    she has ever known
    her thoughts are your thoughts,
    no longer just her own
    constantly on her mind
    you are
    pulling her closer
    although you're afar
    a charge that
    strong
    can't possibly
    be wrong
    but the longing
    makes the heart ache
    so much, it's a wonder
    that it doesn't break
    So for now she'll
    dream of you
    envision a candlelight
    dinner for two
    And feel the
    electrifying kiss
    Of that elusive
    passionate bliss
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HODEE.... da math-o-matics is on point thankz man

    Sage....ur so right magnetic forces of two wit a sur charge
    can be electrical pleasure thankz a million x sistah

    Angel....yes indeed
    like da radiant mixture
    of a charge unbound
    electrictromatic
    beating a bliss of da
    lover as it uncover
    a rapture of meanings
    happy u was able to
    feel da moment of my
    magnetic twist .
    Thank u happy to know
    i have a fan poeticly wow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz.......
    may she know
    my beings and
    da charge set forth
    that's electrifying
    of my love like a
    force a sur charge
    pulling mental thoughts
    together in one zone
    to feel da moment of
    tyme Thankz for feeling
    da moment of da
    magnetic lover
     
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    Magnetic Lover!!!

    LOL! You are too
    much Brother Rich!!

    Your magnectic force
    is no force to reckon
    with!!!

    Loving the drop!!!!! LOL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    purplemoons .....indeed u know me so well
    my electric charge is hypnotic Thankz sistah
     
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    yes indeed ya got a fan !!!!
    always take me somewhere
    and bring me back down wheeew!!!
    :love:

    this was tightly laid
    and i enjoyed
    the poetic flight
    with you

    Peace
    Angel
     
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