Black Poetry : Magenta Thoughts...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Splash me with your magenta love
    submerge me in your endless river
    Pulsating hues of red cascading
    flowing thru me, making me quiver
    You've entered my bloodstream
    traveling straight to the heart of me
    directly to the core, come,
    float in the waves of my sea
    as we submerge so many
    leagues beneath, reaching the treasure
    of each other's minds simultaneously
    brimming with rubies beyond measure
    radiating roses resting among a
    glorious gleeming gold
    As we each put on our crowns
    adorned in love, behold
    he is her Nubian King
    and she, his Queen
    Magenta thoughts, drifting
    betwixt and between....
     
  2. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...!
    The imagery in this piece is amazing.
    There is such a beautiful vibe here.
    This is definately one of my favorites thus far!
    so by all means, "KEEP EM COMIN"...1
    :fairy:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! the river of love and the warm blood
    makes a heart beat fast love the flow of this sis.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzMelanie, your kind words so humble me sis, as I enjoy your work as well. Thank you sis.
    That pitter patter is undeniable Rich. Thank you for the luv brotha poet.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like your "Glow" ...as you flow and sway with your words of love.
    loved your piece ...and thanks for allowing us to share it with you.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sweet of you to say so Queent, thank you much sista poet.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, my sister, this is rich and eloquent and beautiful. ^5 :cool:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a lovely response gempis, thank you sista poet. And btw, when are you going to give us another one of your scribes?
     
  9. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my....uh....oh my...whoa!!!, you left me breathless, speechless, and thoughtless....oh my...uh...oh my. your imagery and expression were sensoul and beautiful

    Splash me with your magenta love
    submerge me in your endless river

    you got me....oh my, uh from the first two stanzas...oh my :luv: :luv:
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm humbled to know it took you there Nabraska. Thank you, much appreciated poet of the week.
     
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