Black Poetry : Madness!!!!!

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kinda confused..
    misguided......
    led astray...
    ***** it... I'm depressed

    been feeling this way
    sense the turn of yesterday
    when **** just didn't go my way
    so now i'm mad and I wanna say,,,

    ***** THE WORLD!!!!

    like my ***** Pac
    who lived for his own struggle
    and died by his own will...
    **** u may say i'm wrong
    but we all make our destinies
    and plan our futures....
    we sculpt, shape, mold
    and cultivate our purpose in life


    So right now...
    I'm pissed off
    angry
    furious
    enraged
    with a feeling I never felt before
    I could KILL someone
    and just walk away....

    But that's not my reality
    I made my own problems
    I caused my own misery
    stabbed myself in the back
    by not being true to me

    took my ambitionz
    all my hopes dreams
    and goals 4 granted
    and wasted it on smoking chronic
    hanging out
    thugging
    drinking
    sexin'
    partying
    clubbin...

    ***** school !!!
    what's the use right
    ain't no sense in me going back
    I'll just be another stupid mutha phucka
    sleeping in class
    or messing with the nerds
    or getting my smoke on
    that I bought from the security guards
    who supposed to be protecting us young
    kids at school...
    and yet they drug dealers
    and pill pushers
    selling poison to me
    and training young hookers
    to make that money
    take that money
    that's all they are worth anyway right? RIGHT?
    Wrong *****!!!!

    So I let 10 years pass by
    from age 17 to 27
    ain't **** changed but my age
    and ohh yeah..... my friends are different
    they now are ******
    and project *******
    baby mommaz
    who ******** boo koo
    baby daddies
    and getting life back
    just how they live...
    and here am I
    caught in the mist
    of this treacherous
    malicious
    madness
    adorned with foolishness
    with no hope of recovery
    no future to build on...
    my present is phucked up
    cause I couldn't forget my past


    so I guess I'll float on.......
    float on.......
    for the rest of my life
    and not care or love myself
    not even loving any body else
    just taking and taking
    never giving
    nor receiving peace of mind
    and joy of the heart
    or health of the body....
    **** I'm phucked up....

    SO ***** THE WORLD..
    I'm a hustler 4 life
    and I'll stay that way
    till I take in that last breath
    and die a phucked up death!!!

    **** No offense 2 anyone who reads this. This piece is from people I've known, people I've seen and people I continually pray for. This is a visual of what it's like for a person with no hope*****

    And remember: The way you live..... it's a choice for u to do
    and the death you die....... it's all on U.....
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEACE!!!!!!!
    1 LUV.....
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl I elt this....and I liked the angle you used to bring this out.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    slap in da face u took it way up to only speak da truth
    on life we pose on self .......keep talking i'm listening!
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Bishop & $Rich$ 4 understanding this peace...
    I dedicate this to all my young hustlers....hustling 4 peace of mind!
    1 Luv....
     
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    this was good

    liked how u started it off

    Kinda confused..
    misguided......
    led astray...
    ***** it... I'm depressed
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love lonelypoet!!! thankx a whole bunch my friend...
     
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    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was real good. shouldn't be offensive to anybody if they see what u were saying.
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya k0k0... and thank you!!!! I appreciate that ... 1 Luv
     
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    this **** is really real in my eyez...
    some people just dont have any hope..
    its messed up but whut can you do but interpret tha pain
    and low's our people go through..

    i like this one simply cause i can relate--
    but its never too late to get ya mindright--
    one luv poet..
     
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