Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Sep 28, 2001.
...made to love me.
you done parted my Afro with this beautiful scribe sis. These are my favorite lines although I am diggin the entire peace but these here:
He said that his
Mama & Daddy made him…
sole-ly for the purpose
of loving Me…
OKAY OKAY Okay...you done dropped a bomb! again....again...again...do ya thang.
This is a lovely piece. I could just hear it spoken.....badd flow
Madd Sistahly Love
GA..this is beautifully sweet and tender....to receive a love like this, would be everything a heart could ask for, want or need....
ZorbShun. its always a pleasure to be read by
you, sis! & when you like it... it's like Christmas!
MRB. well you know! what can i say?!!
seriously... thanks for showin' me love on this!!
Cindy. LOL... you are too cute!! & i really really
appreciate the compliments... more than you know!!
thanks for taking the tyme!!
CoCo. you are always soooo kind! it's funny that
you mention hearing it... 'cause i've been practising
reading it... for my next open mic adventure! i'll think of ya!
KT. i love your responses... its like you take the tyme
to really gather a genuine feel for the piece! thank You!
sweet sunshyne...gurl, this piece is so romantically sweet. what do i always say? well, you know...your love poetry is always tyght.
very nicely done, dear friend. yes, indeed.
Lister. don't nothin' make this Sun Shyne like a
response from You, Sis!! & that is nothin' but da truth!
as ALLLLL ways... thank You for takin' the tyme!! i
appreciate you!! but you know that, ryght? rrryght! (lol)
Now see this ain't no regular kinda playdough poetry..this here is the stuff of long lasting soul mating molds
A very tight piece if sunshyne indeed!!
Isn't it nice.....
To have experience that type of love.....this was a beautiful poem Sunshyne.....btw thanx for posting to my poem...
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