Black Poetry : Made to Love Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Sep 28, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...made to love me.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny

    you done parted my Afro with this beautiful scribe sis. These are my favorite lines although I am diggin the entire peace but these here:

    He said that his
    Mama & Daddy made him…
    sole-ly for the purpose
    of loving Me…


    One
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OKAY OKAY Okay...you done dropped a bomb! again....again...again...do ya thang.

    blak
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    This is a lovely piece. I could just hear it spoken.....badd flow :toast:

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA..this is beautifully sweet and tender....to receive a love like this, would be everything a heart could ask for, want or need....

    K
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ZorbShun. its always a pleasure to be read by
    you, sis! & when you like it... it's like Christmas! :)

    MRB. well you know! what can i say?!! :lol:
    seriously... thanks for showin' me love on this!!

    Cindy. LOL... you are too cute!! & i really really
    appreciate the compliments... more than you know!!
    thanks for taking the tyme!!

    CoCo. you are always soooo kind! it's funny that
    you mention hearing it... 'cause i've been practising
    reading it... for my next open mic adventure! i'll think of ya! :)

    KT. i love your responses... its like you take the tyme
    to really gather a genuine feel for the piece! thank You!
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet sunshyne...gurl, this piece is so romantically sweet. what do i always say? well, you know...your love poetry is always tyght.
    very nicely done, dear friend. yes, indeed.


    ~~~expressedlove~~~
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister. don't nothin' make this Sun Shyne like a
    response from You, Sis!! & that is nothin' but da truth!
    as ALLLLL ways... thank You for takin' the tyme!! i
    appreciate you!! but you know that, ryght? rrryght! (lol)
     
  9. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now see this ain't no regular kinda playdough poetry..this here is the stuff of long lasting soul mating molds ;)

    A very tight piece if sunshyne indeed!!

    *love-dough*

    :toast:
     
  10. epiphany

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    Isn't it nice.....

    To have experience that type of love.....this was a beautiful poem Sunshyne.....btw thanx for posting to my poem...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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